Torn by dumbledorefluertwins
Summary: A dark fic about families torn apart. Daisy Potter is thirteen years old and is already burdened with the responsibilty of her autistic sister and ill mother. Will she ever be able to go to Hogwarts?
This fic deals with Autism and other Mental disorders so if you're easily upset by such thing then I advise you not to read this fic.
Ratings: 3rd-5th Years [ - ]
Category: Post-Hogwarts
Characters: None
Warnings: Character Death, Mental Disorders
Challenge:
Serie: None
Chapters: 5 Completed?: Yes
Wordcount: 9023 Viewcount: 13407
Published on: 02/10/07 Updated On: 05/04/07
This fic deals with Autism and other Mental disorders so if you're easily upset by such thing then I advise you not to read this fic.
Ratings: 3rd-5th Years [ - ]
Category: Post-Hogwarts
Characters: None
Warnings: Character Death, Mental Disorders
Challenge:
Serie: None
Chapters: 5 Completed?: Yes
Wordcount: 9023 Viewcount: 13407
Published on: 02/10/07 Updated On: 05/04/07
1. Chapter 1, My family. by dumbledorefluertwins [ - ] (1873 words)
This fic is completely different to my other post-Hogwarts, it's much darker and has no actual action, so if you're looking for gripping Death Eater battles then read a different fic. As always, constructive criticsim is alway welcome in reviews.
2. Chapter 2, Bursting Bubbles by dumbledorefluertwins [ - ] (1157 words)
If you'd like to ask any questions about the story or my writing style or anything at all, I have a thread in the duelling club on the forums, called Apollo13 steps forward to duel, muttering "I'm gonna die..."
3. Chapter 3, ASBO's, Aunt's and Hogwarts. by dumbledorefluertwins [ - ] (1396 words)
This chapter uses a lot of English slan, so I'll just list it here. If there are anymore that I've missed and you don't understand just yell.
ASBO ~ In this country we have a system were kid's that cause a lot of trouble get something called an ASBO, where they are not allowed in certain area's and they get a curfew. Usually, if someone seems trashy or rough and we're annoyed at them, we call them ASBO's, saying that they're thugs. Unfotunatly, some kid's are now taking ASBO's as a badge of honur. The goverment now has stupidly made that problem even worse by introducing "super-ASBO's". Yeah, that'll help.
GCSE's ~ A set of exams we take in our eleventh year at school that determins what A-levels we can take, which determins what Uni we can go to.
Fit ~ Although when we describe someone as fit we mean that they're good at excersising, we can also mean that they're pretty or sexy.
Also, I'm concerned that some people may be upset by this chapter. If you are, just leave a review saying so and I'll edit this chapter.
Please R&R!
~Evie
4. Chapter 4, The Funeral by dumbledorefluertwins [ - ] (2436 words)
WARNING - You will cry.
Please review!!
~Evie
5. Chapter 5, A Castle at the end of the Rainbow. by dumbledorefluertwins [ - ] (2161 words)
**Sobs** This is the last chapter. I can't say I've had fun writing this, because it's not a "fun" type of fic, but it's been truely amazing and awe-inspiring to write. I want to thank everyone who reviewed this but especially my beta, Abbi, Babekitty_92, for being so helpful.
I hope you all enjoy the last chapter, as this one isn't so much of a tear jerker, more of a proud smile jerker. ;)
I'll miss writing this!
~Evie