08/25/07
I read, garden, knit and study engineering.
I don't read or write fanfic so much anymore, but I reappear periodically to check up on old friends.
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Painfully Obvious by Mary
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: "Severus... I only thought that I was being painfully obvious during my last year." HGSS, Challenge Response, COMPLETE
Date: 08/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Painfully
This is great, I love how it follows the conversation format of
Really?
Why..?
NOOO!!
Yes.
Yes.
..Yes.
Yes, but who said I agreed to this?
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Reminds me of hitch hiker's guide in some odd way.
Are the there more?
The Curse Of The Lemon Drops by sitopanaki
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: Hermione is slowly losing her marbles and develops an unhealthy obsession with Snape – to his horror. The task of saving what is left of her sanity falls upon him of all people. What's wrong with Hermione and can he help her?
Date: 09/17/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: His Own Little Fan Club
What could have possibly turned our strict, sensible Hermione into.. a "sex-crazed rhinoceros on bad acid"? (as Terry Pratchett would have put it)
that seems a little out of bounds even for the Twins and their wheeze-worthy exploits.
Before Dawn by Mary
Rated: Professors •Summary: He pretends not to care that she’s using him. Adult!HG/SS, Complete. Angsty
Date: 08/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Before Dawn
that's so sweet! I love how there isn't really any smut or anything (I was all but shocked to find how racy these things get)
*goes to see what else you've written*
Master of Enchantment by Subversa
Rated: Professors •Summary: Winner in the Best Mid-Length Story and Best Romance categories in Round One of the Most Potente Passions SSHG Awards.
It begins the summer after Seventh Year, when the war is raging on, with an unexpected moment of tenderness. What is this inexplicable feeling Hermione experiences? And how can she get Snape to discuss it with her, when all he wants to do is avoid her? Rating for last chapter, only.
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
I've read and loved most of your stories and this one's no exception.
Well, maybe the "delicious arse"-type of stuff isn't quite my speed, but hey, I've seen rusty buckets that were more romantically inclined than me.
What do I know?
Hmm.. I don't know, but I -think- that
"She reached for his him,"
between these two ^^ one must be extraneous.
Thank you, lady
-- willow
P.S.: I too, love the words "duffer" and "untoward".
Author's Response: Thanks for the head\'s up; I made the correction.
Sins of the Father by TheVault
Rated: Professors •Summary: There was something about him that made him irresistible to her. Siobhan Murphy will go to any lengths to ascertain her deepest desires - but when the object of those desires is a married man twice her age with secrets darker than she can imagine, she will find herself caught in a scandalous liaison that she can't walk away from. Not Canon-Compliant.
Date: 09/24/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Mr Malfoy’s Reputation
“You — you were more distracted then I was,” he said. “Something wrong?”
*than
Date: 09/25/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Secrets Revealed
and you’re too damn self-involved to care how this effects me.”
“How this effects you?”
(Replace: affects)
Date: 09/25/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Rising Tides
Okay, scratch that - Severus is pure evil.
He would be fluffy evil too, if he ever showered.
Date: 09/25/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Disillusionment
they’re warnings
(Replace: their)
Date: 09/25/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: In Want of a Distraction
"and his fingers closed around his wrist."
her wrist, maybe?
Date: 09/23/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Something of Interest
*shudders* oooough...
I like your story line - complete with the liss trying to get to Lucius through Draco.
Date: 09/24/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Almost Too Easy
“It’s not usual such a full-time job
(Replace: usually)
Amazing story, great OC (believe me, I almost never say this), keep it up =)
Date: 09/24/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Games Commence
the girl is pure, fluffy evil.
It's brilliant!
Date: 09/24/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Tiramisu
Oh, this is so good, it must fattening!
Though I don't know how I feel about Siobhan being
a) Siobhan (such is the trouble with names that are spelled nothing like how they're pronounced)
b) Red-haired and freckled, ginger-heads can never strike me as anything, but clumsy, vulnerable (to which there is scientific backing) and more-or-less benevolent.
Author's Response: Um, well. She\'s Irish, meaning it\'s not uncommon for her to be red-haired, freckled, or have the name \"Siobhan\". Also, I know plenty of people with red-hair and/or freckles who are certainly not clumsy, vulnerable or benevolent. Again, the Irish. We may have a cultural tendency to be friendly and sociable, but also violent and temperamental (and sexual, to be blunt).
Date: 09/24/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Up Against A Wall
Lucius Malfoy = Mrs Robinson x10
Who knew?
First Name Basis by Vanityfair
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Miss Granger and Prof. Snape make the awkward transition to Hermione and Severus...or is that 'Mione and Sevie? Throw in a game of MASH and you have a humorous look at the nature of first names.
Date: 12/31/07 Title: Chapter 3: Hermie
This is a wonderfully hilarious story - really.
And oh, how I'd love to see my seventh-grade Algebra teacher's face if I'd called him "Piglet" - the name by which he was referred to colloquially.
*le sigh*
I'll be anxiously awaiting continuation.
(the three letters at the end promise one, should I dispair?)
Truth Be Told by CraftySlytherin
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: What happens when Fred and George Weasley, Hogwarts' reknowned kings of pranks, decide to spike a shipment of pumpkin juice bound for Hogwarts with truth potion? A day filled with true confessions of Hogwarts students!!!!!
Date: 09/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot
ohmygodno.. Not entirely tasteful, but hilarious nevertheless.
Not Another Mary Sue Fic! by Air Elemental
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: A Mary Sue Parody fic! Infinity Babe has moved from New York to Hogwarts with her 'oh-so-evil' parents. Can Harry and the gang stop her from warping canon? Not to be taken seriously. Rated PG-13 for a reason. Scriptfic.
Date: 11/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Act One
That's wonderful =)
Can I just point people in this direction when they come up with these.. erm, babes?
Thank you =)
Date: 11/28/07 Title: Chapter 2: Act Two
"you’re all good looking in an ugly sort of way…"
*forms a crowd*
*gives a round of applause*
*adjusts tie*
The forklift part was great too - I imagined it and it was still great.
Date: 11/28/07 Title: Chapter 3: Act Three
"What are you doing back here anyway, Malfoy? Was Voldemort too big for you?"
*gives brain dirty look*
*gets dirtier look back from brain*
*turns red, hides self in sock drawer*
heee hee I hate to give you non-constructive reviews like these (trust me, I'm not always a giggling idiot), but there's hardly anything to remark on and the time is certainly ripe for a fic like this.
But who in Scott's name is Jack Sloper?
Date: 11/28/07 Title: Chapter 4: Act Four
Oh the dread..
"(that was kept in his bottom draw)"
Shouldn't that be "bottom drawer"?
Well, anyway - the piano part is charming.
My dad loves making fun of that "piano in the bushes" phenomenon - you know how people in cheesy tv shows always seem to have a lavish banquet for two stashed in a disused lavatory?
Yes. It never goes out of style apparently.