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05/15/05




I'm 30 years old, married and an avid reader.

I love Fantasy books. Some of my favorite Authors include JKR, David Eddings, Tad Williams, Marion Zimmer Bradley, Elizabeth Hayden, and Robert Jordan.

I have a twin sister that betas for me. We have always been best friends and I hope we will stay that way.

I have found a great fondness for taking Hapkido. I'm currently a purple belt, and really having fun since I have gotten my twin, Step-sister, and husband to start coming to class with me. I also have a few other massage therapists from my office that come.

My favorite Animals are penguins. I also have a thing for cats, which led to me writing my first story, Switched.

My first Child was born in June. She is totally amazing, and I can't wait until she is old enough to share Harry with.

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Lacrima Serpentis by Insecurity

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: This story is set in the dystopian society of Wizarding England under the control of Voldemort. Fifteen years after leaving Hogwarts, Harry Potter is in hiding; he fears the words of the Prophecy and has lost the will to fight. This story tells the tale of an adult Hermione who sacrifices everything: her family, her moral beliefs and eventually her dignity, in order to save the Wizarding world. She becomes a Death Eater under the recommendation of someone she barely trusts. She struggles to find the courage and strength, but with every choice she makes she gets deeper and deeper into danger.




Chapter 33 is finally up. Thank you for your support and patience..
Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 01/22/06 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I personally really like Hermione's plan. It won't be easy, but reminding people of what is worth fighting for is always a good thing. Showing people the beauty of life and living when things are bad is what gives hope and makes you appreciate the good even more. I hope that Fred can come up with a good idea to help her. If anyone can, he will. I'm also glad that Ron is starting to come around. I hope that something good can happen with Lupin too. I'm really feeling sorry for him, but then, I've always been a Lupin fan. :)

Author's Response: *makes mental note to have something good happen to Lupin*

I am glad you like the plan. I thought about it for a long time before I decided on it. I remember speaking to Bridget about it, and she expressed her doubts quite rightly. It will be a tough one to pull off and so I am not going to rush it. If the story doesn't get compelted just yet, so be it, I want it to be right.

Thank you for your constant support. I aim to please, and I'm beginning to gain my confidence in the fic again.



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 12/04/05 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Voldemort finally appearing makes me worried for Hermione, but the maternal instinct that she has should help a lot. Not much excitement in this chapter, but it is definitely leading to some more things! I look forward to the next chapter, esp. since this one ended in a sort of Cliffie!



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 06/21/06 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

So much happened in that chapter. Snape is so believable in that letter. He shows how much he cares, but doesn't try to be who he knows Hermione wants him to be. He is totally true to himself. I find it interesting the way he tries to protect Hermione, only to have it come to nothing with whoever it was that found her at the end of the chapter. I hope that he ends up saving her some way. I think he has that much in him. I wait anxiously for your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. I can\'t really respond too well because next chapter explains some things, but you\'re right, he should rescue her. She deserves more than that letter.



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 10/30/05 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Poor Neville. I think that Hermione is going a little mad, but then she has been acting totally against her nature. I hope that something good happens to her soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, she is going mad -- bless her! I think she needs some good news...



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 08/01/05 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I think that you definitely succeeded in keeping Snape ambiguous. There is no way to know which side he is truly on. For titles...that isn't my strongest part either...but for some reason, Wounded comes to mind. Hermione is wounded from what she did before (in abandoning her friends) and is wounded now by insecurity and having to live as a Death Eater, and everything she truly needs to end.

Author's Response: Thank you for your suggestion. I had to change tact immediatly with Snape having read HBP so I'm glad he still comes across as ambigious because I haven't yet decided what side I'm going to place him on (I really should do some forward planning!)



Daddy by blondebouncingferret

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Post Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...
Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 12/31/05 Title: Chapter 10: The B.A.T

I just found your story. I must say that I find it very good. I love the tensions between Miranda and Hermione. I love that Hermione is still friends with Victor, and that Ron would still get jeolous of that. I'm glad that Ginny let her feelings for Ron out way her want of making Miranda jeolous. I don't like Miranda. She seems to be all about herself, and doesn't seem to care for Ron at all. Of course that will be part of what makes him go back to Hermione. I can see that the entire break up was really Miranda, and not Ron's idea. I like how Harry and Ginny are starting to pair back up. It is just a fun story to read. Hannah is soooo cute and has tons of character. Some people don't let kids get any. It was cool that Ron was there for her first bit of magic. He has missed so much of her life, though I totally understand the reasoning there. I look forward to reading more of this story!!!



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 03/31/06 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

Thank you for such a great story! It is great seeing how things were 10 years in the future. It was nice to see them so happy!



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 02/17/06 Title: Chapter 11: September Nineteenth

That was a great chapter! Miranda truly is clueless. Your goals have to be the same as your partners. One person seriously wanting children when the other one doesn't can become a big problem. I look forward to reading who was at the door.



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 03/17/06 Title: Chapter 12: The Only One He Ever Loved

It is great to see Hermione and Ron together. It is also nice to see how much Ron has grown up. It think that is definitely realistic and stays very true to the characters. :)



Spirits in the Future by JessicaH

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Voldemort attacks the Potters, James and Lily try to protect their beloved baby boy. Then suddenly they're in a house they do not know. Harry isn't with them and they don't know what happened. Where are they? And who are the redhead children running down the stairs? Why have they been sent? The story is placed in the future, years after Voldemort's death, but danger is still lurking. Features Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione.

Joint winner in the genfic category of the Multifaceted Fanfiction Awards
Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 06/08/05 Title: Chapter 18: Left Behind

I like the way you are moving James and Lily forward, slowly, and we get to see their reactions! I like your futuristic Harry too...seems very grounded. Great father figure! :)

Author's Response: Thanks.



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 05/21/05 Title: Chapter 7: Hogwarts

Great story. I like the way you keep us guessing about some things, and answer other things! Makes it a very interesting read! One of my questions about Millie ( and I know you're not telling yet) is who is her mom? :)

Author's Response: Actually I already answered that one in the story, when Harry is talking to Ron and Hermione about Millie's first time with them, so it's there for you to read already. Anyway, thank you for the review and I'm glad you enjoy the story.



The Deal by kjpzak

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Do you ever get over your first love? By helping her teammates, Ginny finds out.
Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 05/29/05 Title: Chapter 1: N/A

That was a great story!! Thanks for the entertainment, and keeping true to the characters! :)

Author's Response: You are very welcome! Glad you enjoyed it!



Mistaken Identity by GryffindorGoddess

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Final chapter has arrived! AU. Ron awakens to find that everything at Hogwarts has changed; there are people he doesn't recognize that continually boss him around, and the people he does recognize seem different somehow. Chaos ensues, leaving Ron feeling utterly alone and confused.
Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 06/05/05 Title: Chapter 7: Surprise Visit

Good Chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next, esp, when he tries to see the Death Eaters! :)

Author's Response: Yes, it should make for a good time, indeed. =)



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 07/31/05 Title: Chapter 10: Noble Intentions

Very interesting chapter! I'm still following the story! Nice twist there with Nicki being Barrington's daughter. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! =)



Malicious Intentions by Lurid

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This story follows the Trio, Bill Fleur and Ginny after Hogwarts, Engagements and Marriages... and children. Bill and Fleur's daughter Millie is haunted at Hogwarts by her younger sister. The only “abnormal” thing about this haunting? She was believed dead … but is most definitely alive.


Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 02/05/06 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Thoughts and the Fidelius Charm

I have just caught up to your story and I have to say that I'm enjoying it. The heart ache that Fleur shows in this chapter is something that I can totally understand. I hope that she gets to hold her baby girl again and let her know what love truly is. I know for sure that Wendy has not known it since she was taken from her true parents. I look forward to seeing how the new trio will help Harry defeat Voldemort once and for all.

Author's Response:

*tear* awwwwww heart wrenching, truly. I love how readers have some insight into what the evil character is feeling. Not that Wendy is evil.. or anything *looks sideways*

Yeah! Long live Harry! With Hermione and Ron's second child on the way, i doubt the "Golden Trio" will be the one's to help Harry! Ooh, you're a smart reader. Well done.

-Steoh



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Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 05/31/05 Title: None

Great story!!! I hope it isn't done yet!! I need to know what happens!!!



Blood of the Heart by kjpzak

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: 7th Yr Sequel to Ancient Magic. It is now known the power of immortality resides inside Harry and Ginny. Will their combined powers be enough to protect them from the Dark Lord?
Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 02/26/06 Title: Chapter 36: Overpowering Love, Part II

That was another great chapter! I'm glad that Nathan and Anna were able to get out and see that what they worked so hard to help Harry and Ginny with worked! Molly was GREAT! I think she doesn't get her due a lot of the time. She is just seen as the mother figure that waits at home. I think she has a lot more in her! Snape still has me guessing. The dagger adds even more questions. Wormtail was wonderful. It was nice that he saved Ginny to repay his debt. It is nice seeing Harry's and Ginny's love for each other grow. Love is indeed a powerful thing.

Author's Response: You know, I agree about Molly. I think she has lots more to her than just being a mom. Don't we all? :) And that dagger...hmmm...I will tell you that it will be an unanswered question when this story ends. That doesn't mean I won't ever answer it (as in should I decide to continue this tale). :) Thanks!



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: Chapter 34: Circino Amplexor, Part II

This part is just as good as the first part! It was great when they finished the circlet and had Lily, James, Catarina, and Dumbledore there to finish weaving the strands. It really does show how much love they have, with the living and the dead. I hope that Percy can get help fast enough. A head injury is nothing to laugh at! George and Fred give the comic relief, like normal! :) I do hope we get to see some more spirits in the tunnels. Sirius would be AWESOME! :) I will understand if there aren't any more though. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry it had to be split up, but I'm glad you enjoyed both parts. A head injury is very serious business indeed! Another spirit is coming in the tunnels in the next chapter. Next chapter next week. :)



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 02/22/06 Title: Chapter 35: Overpowering Love, Part I

This was another great chapter. I like the long chapters. It is nice to sit down and just read. I don't mind the cliffies either. They just keep me wanting more!! I really can't wait to read the next section! I'm soooo glad that Anna and Nathan are together. Catarina's influence there was GREAT! I miss her wit! Fred and George were really cool also!! There dancing lines were so like them. Poor Neville!! He just can't keep his nose safe! LOL I look forward to part two!!

Author's Response: lol - thank you! It was nice to have Catarina back. I miss her, too. And yes, poor Neville! :)



Reviewer: Cheshlin Signed
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 31: Sero Compago

Another great chapter. Everyone acted right on at that bonding ceremony. I hope that Anna and the baby stay ok!! I'm going to be worried about them, until they are ok!! Poor Nathan. This is not what he needed at this time. At least Harry and Ginny are almost ready to do their part. It would have been worse if Anna were taken before the bonding ceremony! I look forward to the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Anna's a strong one who is one of Gringott's best tomb raiders. Next chapter will be up after the holidays - my beta works retail. :)