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Lunicle [Contact]
09/04/08

http://novelistnation.proboards56.com


Hia all, I'm Luna! Thanks for checking out my bio- I hope you got here because I got a story published that you liked!

I must get some things out of the way....

OTP: Remus/Tonks all the way. They are just my favourite.

Favourite Characters: Remus and Tonks, and then Luna.

Favourite Book: OOTP. Has anyone else ever left the second "O" out of OOTP? Because I did that once (on a forum- I don't proofread as carefully on those) and everyone asked if my favourite book was seriously called One True Pairing.

Random Things About Me:

I will be available for beta'ing, and I actually love to proofread (if you've ever been on HP Fanfiction and stumbled across one of my reviews- under this same username- you know what I mean.), so I will be delighted if anyone asks me to beta for them.

Random facts:

I love Evanescence.

I also love country music. Besides Evanescence and Flyleaf, it's all I listen to. I'm not what you'd call eclectic.

If you say Stephenie Meyer is the new JKR, I will be sorely tempted to smack you over the head with one of Meyer's unnecessarily long, fluff filled books.

I'm really tall. Like, I'm that tall person who's sitting in front of you at a movie who you wish would just move already. On behalf of all of us, we're sorry.

I've had enough true tragedy and drama in my life that I can sincerely tell anyone who wishes their life was more exciting that I'll trade.

I'm homeschooled.

I used to be a warm and happy person who'd hug all her friends. That person was replaced with the Adrian Monk-like germophobe I am today.

I'd like to walk up to the Jonas Brothers and tell them that they are no-talents (because they are).

I think Miley Cyrus needs to listen to Everybody's Fool by Evanescence.

The song Imaginary by Evanescence pretty much describes my life.

I like giving epic rants of doom on my website about stupid people doing stupid things.

I think little kids are awesome.

Fall is my favourite season.

I'm a thinker and an over-analyser. I'm not jaded.

I want to be a 1) a country singer, 2) lead singer of a rock band like Evanescence or 3) a naturopath (doctor who treats using natural remedies- it's actually not the same as a homeopath, if you're wondering.)

Babies terrify me.

I love people who love me for me- whether it's for my stories, my music, or just my random weirdness- those are my favourite people. So to anyone who ever took time to review one of my stories, thanks so much!

Random stuff!

Weird is good, strange is bad, and odd is when you don't know which to call someone. Weird is the same as different, which is the same as unique, so weird is good. If you are weird and proud of it, copy this onto your profile!

92 percent of American teens would die if Abercrombie and Fitch told them it was uncool to breathe. Copy this in your profile if you would be the 8 percent that would be laughing your head off.

Ninety-five percent of teenagers are concerned about being popular. If you are one of the five percent who aren't, copy this, put it in your profile, and add your name to the list: Queen S of Randomness 016, Queen B of Randomness 016, AnimieKittyCaffe, The Gypsy Pirate Queen, That Bloody Demon, The Astrology Nerd, Shadow929, Crazy Billie Joe Loving Freak, Yavie Aelienel, Hyperactively Bored, Spymaster E, Shanny-Boo, Gem W, Brown-eyed angelofmusic, piratesswriter/fairy to be, Bara-Minomoto, Em Quagmire, Buffy The Mary-Sue Slayer, Random Little Writer, SamanthaFantasyFan, EdwardAddict, Supergirrl, Elemental-ANimal, Mother Nature's Daughter, Schmerg_The_Impaler, clumsywerewolf2438, Lunicle,

If you or your best friend is insane, copy this into your profile.

If you have ever pushed on a door that said pull or vice versa copy and paste this into your profile.

If you have ever fallen up the stairs copy this into your profile.

If you've been on the computer for hours on end, reading numerous fanfictions, copy this into your profile.

98 percent of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2 percent who hasn't, copy & paste this in your profile.

If you love God with your whole heart and are 100 percent proud of it, copy & paste this in your profile.

Even when you can’t see Him, God is there! if you believe in God put this in your profile.

You know you live in 2008 when...

1. You go to a party, sit down, and take MySpace pics.

2. You haven’t played solitaire with real cards in years.

3. The reason for not staying in touch with your friends is that they don't have AIM/LiveJournal/MySpace.

4. You'd rather look all over the house for the remote instead of just pushing the button on the TV.

6. Your evening activity is sitting at the computer.

7. You read this list, and keep nodding and smiling.

8. You think about how stupid you are for reading this.

9. You were too busy to notice number five.

10. You actually scrolled back up to check if there was a number five.

11. And now you're laughing at your stupidity.

12. Put this in your profile if you fell for it. You know you did.

If you don't watch Laguna Beach or the O.C. or The Hills religiously, never have, never will, and are proud of it, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you’re a feminist and proud of it, copy and paste this in your profile. GIRLS RULE!


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Love Keeps Us Together (Sometimes Apart) by DontCallMeNymphadora

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Ok, so I really really want to apologize to everyone that has read this and wanted more. I just... I got to a point of writer's block, big time... and I got lazy. I'm really really sorry about that. And, I wish I could add to this, but I just... I don't really have other ideas. I'm terrible at writing chapter work. I can never seem to finish it. So, I know it left off awkwardly, but odds are, it's gonna stay that way, at least for a very long while. I'm very sorry. And, heads up, I completely beyond appreciate everyone that has read and reviewed this. I saw the read count being over 22,000 today, and I was just like WOW. I never ever imagined that would happen!!! Anyways, this is pretty much the end of the story indefinitely, at least for now.
Reviewer: Lunicle Signed
Date: 09/20/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: A Morning Mishap

What I love about this fic is that you keep it so subtle and humourous. I like to think that their relationship started out this way too. :D

This is weird and random, but the roach thing actually had me grossed out just reading it. You write very vividly!

This is the best Remus/Tonks fic out there as far as I can tell. It's just wonderful. You have talent! I wish I could be a little less angsty in my writing... I love reading humour as much as angsty stuff, but I can only seem to write angsty... Ah well, I can just read other authors' fics that are more humourous, like this one. :D

-Luna-

P.S. I love your username!

Author's Response: Oh my God! Are you serious? Thanks so much... for everything you said! I'm glad that you like it! And, thanks for saying it is the best... that makes me feel amazing! And, thanks, about the username as well!



Reviewer: Lunicle Signed
Date: 09/20/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Bitter Taste of War

I really like the relationship between Tonks and Mad-Eye here. It's so cool (in canon and here) how they argue all the time and yet he's almost like a favourite uncle to her.

You are a really a great writer; the last chapter had me laughing, and this one has me feeling sad. Again, you write quite vividly. It's refreshing to see that in fanfic! (Particularly in a Remus/Tonks fanfic, since that's my OTP and all...)

-Luna-

Author's Response: Thanks so much again! I wish I could learn different ways to say thanks. Your reviews are my longest I've ever recieved, I believe. And, thanks. I think of Mad-Eye kind of like that to her as well, especially since they kind of describe her as his protegee. And, they are that for me as well. Believe me, the Half-Blood Prince movie has had me crying like crazy and also ranting much.



Reviewer: Lunicle Signed
Date: 09/20/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Realisation Hits the Hospital Wing

Your dialogue is very natural, the descriptions are still realistic, and the characterisation and relationships are lovely. I do wish I'd joined early enough that I could have found out how one nominates a fic for the Quicksilver Quill awards...

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Small Nitpicks:

#1: “And, Kingsley Shacklebolt is on his way, too."

Unnecessary comma- should read: And Kingsley Shacklebolt is on his way too.

#2: "...the woman who’s heart he would soon have to break."

Homonym confusion- should be: ...the woman whose heart he would soon have to break. :D

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-Luna-

Author's Response: Thanks... that makes me feel wonderful... I have no idea how anyone nominates, I think it has to do with the other forum thingy. Oh, wow, I'm amazed you noticed... and thanks. I'm also shocked the validating people didn't find it.



Reviewer: Lunicle Signed
Date: 09/20/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Desperation and Suspicion

Kingsley is funny!

And I like how at the end the witch mistook Remus and Tonks for husband and wife. It was cute. :D

-Luna-

Author's Response: Thanks. And, I'm so glad you like all of the parts that you keep listing!



Reviewer: Lunicle Signed
Date: 09/20/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Potential Heartbreak

Wow, you can write anything! Tears, happiness, cockroaches... :D

To be serious, it was a lovely chapter, this. I really love the dialogue and the way you describe her crying. (That sounds weird to say I liked the way she cried, but it was a good description!)

-Luna-

Author's Response: It may sound weird, but I love that you think that!!! And, I love how you think I can write anything. Like, seriously. Thanks soooooo soooo much!!!!!



Reviewer: Lunicle Signed
Date: 09/20/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: A Veela Encounter

I like that you have it that Tonks and Bill dated when they were in school- they seem like the kind of ship that really makes sense. (But thank goodness they didn't stay together or there wouldn't be the Remus/Tonks ship and I would be very sad because it's my favourite. :D)

All the dialogue is, once again, so real. It's lovely.

-Luna-

Author's Response: Thanks. I wonder if it is canon, that... but, I'm so glad Jo didn't put them together. We wouldn't have Remus/Tonks. We'd be the delusional ones!!!! :P Thank you so incredibly much for all of your reviews and compliments on my dialogue as well!



Just a Touch Away by clumsywerewolf2438

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sonfic about Remus' and Tonks' last night alive for "Just a Touch Away" by Echo and the Bunnymen.
Reviewer: Lunicle Signed
Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Just a Touch Away

Hia Remora! I thought I'd review this now that I'm FINALLY a member... I've read this story loads of times by now, but I still love it. I like how you write Tonks. The story starts to make me want to cry, but then you so nicely throw in that blue mohawk bit near the end and make everyone want to laugh...

-Luna-

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you could join, and thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like it! ~Remora



Reviewer: Lunicle Signed
Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Just a Touch Away

Hia Remora! I thought I'd review this now that I'm FINALLY a member... I've read this story loads of times by now, but I still love it. I like how you write Tonks. The story starts to make me want to cry, but then you so nicely throw in that blue mohawk bit near the end and make everyone want to laugh...

-Luna-



Written with Tears by lostinside1

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Their friendship had just ended and they were both in tears trying to overcome the pain of their loss. She is weeping into her pillow and he is down by the lake crying silently. They both cry together, apart.

This one-shot is set on the same night Severus called Lily a mudblood.
Reviewer: Lunicle Signed
Date: 09/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: Words Hurt

This is a really nice story. But I do have a question- why does it have an AU warning? Just curious. :D

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The CC Section:

#1: "As he swooped down, he suck his leg out..."

Typo- should read: As he swooped down, he stuck his leg out...

#2: "To her he would just be that guy I once knew, No-one important, just a part of her past. "

Now, I'm not British, so I can hardly be called an expert at Brit-picking, but I think it would sound better this way...

"To her he would just be that bloke she once knew, no one important, just a part of her past."

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I think this is a really emotional fic, and I absolutely loved it! I'm so glad you reviewed mine, or I wouldn't have found this. (I always read the author pages of anyone who leaves me a review.)

The note at the end was just... heartbreaking, but at the same time very sweet and wonderful.

Good luck with your next fic!

-Luna-

Author's Response:

oops! I accidently replied to your review with a review. :P

It has an AU warning because this scene doesn't actually happen in the books. (See The Princes Tale) Also I needed to get this story past the lovely modlies. :)

I submitted by newest story a few daays ago but it wasn't approved due to a few grammatical and capitalisation errors but hopefully they are sorted out now! It's a bit of a weird one though.

I think I will make those changes you suggested when I get a chance.

Thanks for the feedback. :D

~Anna

 ps. I've just read your profile and it is so funny! :D Its good to know someone else is as mad as me and likes Evanescence! hehe