Hi Everyone!!!
So it's entirely possible I don't have anyone reading my stuff still (understandable, only published one thing and I haven't published anything since 2009!!!) but I am back to writing fan fiction!!! I've really missed it, and Harry keeps me healthy.
I have abandoned the story I started, mostly because looking back on it, I really think the full story would have ruined the one shot. I have also changed - when I wrote "Spaghetti Bolognese and Tinned Pears" I was a junior in high school. Now I'm a junior in COLLEGE!!! Stuff changes, so stories do too :). I will be writing Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny, Draco/Hermione one shots :).
Wow! That was really intense! I'm not a huge Remus/Tonks reader, but that was great! It was really unique, and I thought it was clever of you to write about their final moments, because I wished we all could have said goodbye (not that I wanted to see their deaths, but you know what I mean). Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Check out my other story, I Think This Love is Altering my Brain. :D
I thought it was really great! I liked that you decided to portray James' point of view, and do the opposite of what DH said. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, I like James a lot so I decided to make most of the story from his POV. There are a few times where you get to see what Lily's thinking in the later chapters, though, which is fun, too! thanks again! :)
This is SUCH a clever concept. You've got a great, reflective writing style. I hope you continue naming your chapters in the same way you named this one.
And Ginny's one of my favorites too.
Author's Response: All of the chapters will be named similarly to this one I'm going to send a Neville Luna one to my beta next... won't tell you what it's called though!
I'm posting a similar series of Draco/Hermione fics aswell... if you're interested!
Romantic
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