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07/14/05

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xybolic.

Call me Aji. I am an eighteen-year-old student who studies architecture, though my real dream since I was six was to do animation. I am an artist; I draw and design. Writing and reading are my passion, coming in second behind my love for sketching.

People see me as a boring nerd whose everyday ritual is devoid of any social activity, which is partially true; I am a nerd and I don't socialise as much as one would normally. I am split whether I am a boring person or not. My best friend and very close friends would surely say no, but my sisters would probably say yes. I guess, for you to know, it would depend on our level of interaction as acquaintances.

Little facts:
-Contrary to popular belief, I am, in fact, a creature with two X-chromosomes.
-I tend to buy lots of books and leave most of them in my bookshelf unread due to my busy schedule.
-I'm an Evangelical Christian who is the only one in a Roman Catholic clan.
-I have been single all my life and I prefer it that way until--dare I say it?--marriage. And religion/belief is not the reason (well, partly), can you believe it? It's because boys are too high-maintenance. I love my 'Me' time.
-I already have names for my future children, and they are based on Harry Potter and Artemis Fowl. If I wouldn't be able to conceive, I'll adopt.
-I love Monty Python, A Very Potter Musical, Potter Puppet Pals, Phineas&Ferb, and Glee.
-I had a crush on Chris Colfer when they did Vogue in Glee.
-I hate Twilight. End of.
-During schooldays, I tend to down more or less five cups of coffee.
-I've gone more than three days without sleep. That's normal for architecture students.
-I've never smoked. The smell is nauseating.
-I love swearing colourfully and I borrow swearwords from my favourite books and shows. Dobby's sock.
-I did karate and achieved a black belt and a purple belt in two styles/systems/schools. Beware.
-I read mangas, and I prefer them over anime. I am picky with what I read though.
-I love thick books.
-My favourite punctuations are the semi-colon and em-dash.




My Writing, A History.

JK Rowling inspired me. I was amazed upon reading Harry Potter when I was twelve. That's when I began to write. And also discovered fan fiction. Puberty immensely affected my writing at that time; my genre was clichéd and shallow romance (that I have had no idea about, but I wrote them anyway) and my characters were Sues. My ego had been overly inflated by nonsensically praising reviews. When I realised that my writing was horrid, I left fan fiction for two or three years while trying to make my writing better. Afterwards, I wrote my Harry Potter fan fiction Albus Severus which was quite decent. Then I had another year of writing nothing until I decided to do Artemis Fowl flash fiction exercises to keep what I've improved on so far from deteriorating. I collected them in my A Nib's Babble in Fanfiction.net under the penname xybolic.

My writing is mostly in the humour genre. I think of myself as unfunny and not witty at all, so it makes me wonder how in the world this happened. Hilarious one-liners are hard to come by, and when they do (rarely, mind), I sort of build a humourous situation around it. That's how I write. Eoin Colfer also probably influenced me.

I have yet to find my writing style. I usually have hiatus more often than I write so my writing is a tad undeveloped. I'm trying though, since it's my dream to be published.


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Destined to Be by The Marauder

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James is passionately in love with Lily, but she despises him. Each year things seem to get worse for the love sick boy. When he finally finds the courage to tell her the truth about how he feels, how will Lily react? Will her heart finally make a change?

Follow the two through each year at Hogwarts as hearts are wrenched, twisted, and finally touched as the two struggle to find the love they were destined for…

Last Chapter Added!

For update notification email me at: themarauderfanfics@yahoo.com


Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 01/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: YEAR ONE

OMG, that was one of the greatest! Yay! It's updated! They're so sweet! Full of love! 10000000000000/10!



Prince of Darkness by Bellatrix Lovegood

Rated:
Summary: A prophecy made by his dying mother at birth predicted that the young boy would die young, because of the one he loved. "Never let him love," she cried, and so the father brought him up to be cold and cruel. Yet can humans defy fate? Eventually a G/D ship.
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 08/12/05 Title: Chapter 8: Living the Half Life

i loved the story... draco and ginny are so sweet... i cant stop myself from giggling. please update soon!



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 08/12/05 Title: Chapter 8: Living the Half Life

i loved the story... draco and ginny are so sweet... i cant stop myself from giggling. please update soon!



The Power Of Suggestion by FriendsOfSnape

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "Be careful what you wish for," the old adage goes. So what happens when Hogwarts is under a spell where what you say is what you get?


Chappie 14 is UP! And while it is the end, let us not be sad, but instead read the insanity that has driven so many to review and nearly wet themsleves with delight.
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/13/05 Title: Chapter 1: That's Hand-y, Hermione.

I love it! so funny! please continue!

Author's Response: Chappie seven's coming up! Stay tuned.



Canis Majoris by trinsy

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Adhara Jocelyn Black has always been torn between her loyalty to James Potter, her cousin Sirius's best mate, and Lily Evans, the sister she has never known. But in her seventh year everything changes. Join Jocelyn, Sirius, Lily, and the rest of the Marauders as they battle for their lives... and loves...
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/15/05 Title: Chapter 29: Inscriptions

Why? Why does almost all of your chapters make me cry like this last one? I always cried.... Jocelyn's really caring. He loves Sirius so much.... And now, you lie that this is your very firs FanFic! How could you? It's like the best! It's as if it were written by a professional. All the emotions, the every thing! *sob* Why? Jocelyn, be careful! *sob*



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Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 10/23/05 Title: None

i love your fic. it's so realistic. it's as if it was the real story in behind-the-scenes of the book. it's terrific! are you sure you're not jk? (",)



Too Sweet to Remember by Canadian Confessional

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Meet James Potter, a clever, somewhat mischievous, popular student at Hogwarts. He takes every situation in stride and has everything under control, except one: Lily Evans, an amazingly beautiful and intelligent individual. He loves her more than anything, but she despises him more than anything, and a not-so-impressive run-in late at night with her leaves James thinking that chasing after Lily might be hopeless. Then, a series of events happen in James' life, which is topped off by an unexpected visitor that makes his sixth year too sweet to remember.
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/15/05 Title: Chapter 11: The Christmas Party

Shit! Sorry to cuss but shit! Oh my gosh, what would happen to their friendship? I was shocked, really... I thought Sirius likes Naomii but it was Audrey he likes. I was a bit angry to Lily, you know... I love this fic! O H M Y G O S H ! I love this! I'm really worried about Prongs and Padfoot.... Rating is Millions over 10



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/15/05 Title: Chapter 11: The Christmas Party

Shit! Sorry to cuss but shit! Oh my gosh, what would happen to their friendship? I was shocked, really... I thought Sirius likes Naomii but it was Audrey he likes. I was a bit angry to Lily, you know... I love this fic! O H M Y G O S H ! I love this! I'm really worried about Prongs and Padfoot.... Rating is Millions over 10

Author's Response: LOL! It's quite alright about the cussing, hehe... I'm really glad you like the fic so far, and I'll be sure to update as soon as possible. Thanks!



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/15/05 Title: Chapter 11: The Christmas Party

I wonder what Audrey's reaction would be... I really cant hold my shock about the last part of the chapter...



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/15/05 Title: Chapter 11: The Christmas Party

Update soon, cant wait! Dont leave me hanging!



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/17/05 Title: Chapter 12: Such a Fool

Total awesomeness! Gosh! I wish James and Sirius would make up soon.

Author's Response: Hi! Heheh, I'm really glad you liked it, and don't worry James and Sirius will make up soon. Thanks!



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 02/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Crumble to Ash

Wow... that was very excellent! I sometimes hate it when Lily prejudges James... she doesn't even know him! I'm really glad that James said what he really feels but I dont like Lily's reply at that... anyway, please update soon!



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 02/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Crumble to Ash

Oops, wrong chapter to review... Here's the right one! Wow... that was very excellent! I sometimes hate it when Lily prejudges James... she doesn't even know him! I'm really glad that James said what he really feels but I dont like Lily's reply at that... anyway, please update soon!



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 02/14/06 Title: Chapter 15: The End of the Beginning

I am so stupid. Okay, for the third time, I am now right. this is the right chapter and now, my review: Wow... that was very excellent! I sometimes hate it when Lily prejudges James... she doesn't even know him! I'm really glad that James said what he really feels but I dont like Lily's reply at that... anyway, please update soon!

Author's Response: LOL! That's quite alright! I know what you mean by Lily judging James without "really" understanding him. I'm really glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 02/26/06 Title: Chapter 17: Poetry

yes, James, the seeker! woohoo! I loved this a lot! You like shakespear too? haha... hmmmm... one of my boy classmate understood Shakespear a bit coz a song of his fave band was included in a play of Romeo&Juliet... enough about that... your rating for me will be 1 followed by gazillions of zeros/10!!! Yay!!! update soon!!! I like audrey a lot. I hate Fraser a lot!!!

Author's Response: Wow, I'm very flattered by your rating! Shakespeare? Yeah, I find it pretty interesting. Boys understanding Shakespeare, lol! Thanks so much for reviewing!



Forever Yours by harry_potter_star

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary:
sigh.
Okay. Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay


For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!


James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.


Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 01/08/06 Title: Chapter 12: Rescue Mission

That was good! Really! For the challenge, my guess is maybe in their seventh year then they'll live happily together and I'll live with Sirius happily ever after! Haha!

Author's Response: hey! thanks for the rview! um yeah that guess is cool, good luck with Sirius lol



Unbreakable by Lily4James

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's the beginning of the end, seventh year.

Sure we all know the basic story, but what really happened in James' and Lily's final year at Hogwarts
James likes Lily and Lily likes James, it should be simple but it's not. Will their relationship blossom as they spend the summer together and as they become head boy and girl? Can their friends help get them together? Will Sirius ever beat James' record-breaking number of detentions? Read on and find out.
A tale about love, hatred, food fights and MWPP.
CAUTION: Contains strong Sirius Black moments, be prepared to fall in love with him.
A/N: I feel so terrible and guilty about everyone who is asking me to update because i have tried and tried but every time i post it it gets rejected. I'm going to rip my hair out if it doesnt get accepted soon! I promise to keep trying, please stick with me in this hour of stress, i need you guys!

Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/25/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

I love this fic! You're in my faves. And the caution about Sirius, dont worry, I'm already in love with him.

P.S. He's not dead, just sleeping behing the curtains.

P.S.2 Rock on \m/ you're the greatest! Update soon!



Hogwarts, Meet the Marauders! by Kelsid

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: In this sequel to Harry's Our What???, James and Lily have time-travelled to the past and finally found out the truth about who their son is. Meanwhile, in their true time-frame, the Marauders have concocted a plan to rescue James and Lily. But when they arrive in Harry's time, they realize they can't get back and must seek the aid of their older counterparts.
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 02/14/06 Title: Chapter 4: In Which Many Things Happen

Haha, hilarious! Gosh, I love the shakesperean touch! I love reading Romeo and Juliet! Sirius here is like me; my friends grag me in school as I recite things like, "Thus with a kiss, I die" or "Sins from thy lips? O tresspass sweetly urged! Give me my sin again." and sometimes I greet them, "Poala, thou look great, my fine lady!" wahaha!

Author's Response: lol, I ended up finishing Romeo and Juliet when we were only supposed to read to Act III! Shakespeare is an awesome dude, you've got to admit. My friends don't appreciate Shakespeare much either, but when we went to see Macbeth at local theater, one of my friends decided that Macbeth was the most awesomely disturbing thing she'd ever seen (and I agree.)



Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

remus ran to himself! haha!



Lessons by Hallie Black

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Professor Sprout has just given 7th year Gryffindors a new project, where the class, divided in pairs, has to raise a rare plant. What’s gonna happen when Lily finds out who her partner is? And how will she survive in his sole company?
Reviewer: ray_16 Signed
Date: 02/28/06 Title: Chapter 6: Hogsmeade

woohoo! An update! I liked this a lot! Sirius (so hot!) brings me laughter. I feel sorry for Lily... but, anyway, James to the rescue. I love the last part when they hugged. They're so sweet. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Well, I'm really glad you liked it!! Did you think the wait was well worth it? Anyway, I'll try to finish this seventh chapter sooner, I promise!