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Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power by mrsgeorgeweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After the trauma of his sixth year Harry and his friends enter into their last year of magical education at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The trio try to balance passing their exams with fighting Voldemort and planning their futures. Despite all that, romance will fill the air with wedding bells ringing out. This year Harry is in more danger than ever when his enemy finds new ways to try and get the Boy Who Lived. Voldemort’s presence will be felt more than ever as he steals more lives; can Harry find himself before its too late? And what adventures will he have along the way?

If you haven’t read Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived then I would strongly urge you to do so because if you don’t then this story probably won’t make any sense to you. Be helpful to writers by Reading and Reviewing!

The very last chapter of this fic has been reworked. Please re-read there's more about the kids in there! Also my author's notes on the final chapter have also been added. Ten part fic related to this going up shortly!!
Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/06/05 Title: Chapter 3: Return to Godric's Hollow

Awesome chapters! I LOVE this story! Can't wait for more chapters!!!

Author's Response: *does a little dance* I'm so chuffed that you liked it. I'll have more for you very,very soon.



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 23: Presents

Oh no! What's happened?! I'm freakin' out!!! I need to know what's goin' on!! Please, oh, please update again today! I know you're great at quick updates! I just hate cliffies!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/30/05 Title: Chapter 21: The Lions vs. The Snakes

I loved it as always... there's not much praise I can continue to give that I haven't already! I can't wait for Ron and Hermione to sort out their problems. I love how you write them as a couple, it's so perfect. Anyways, I love it to pieces and can't wait for more!!!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/29/05 Title: Chapter 18: To The Quidditch Pitch?

Another wonderful chapter! I hate that they're all fighting but geez, I'd be mad at Harry too if he punched my brother. Blood it thicker than water kinda stuff. Love the quick updates!

Author's Response: You're absolutely right, blood is thicker than water. I'd be fairly ticked if he'd hit my brother too, but Ginny is over-reacting a little.



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/26/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Best Summer

I loved how they just totally picked up on the fact that something was going on and helped the professors. True seventh years. I liked it!

Author's Response: After all these years at school they can tell when the teachers mean business and they are quite heroic so it's hardly surprising. Thanks for your review!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/02/05 Title: Chapter 25: Unhappy Birthday

Ooh! I like it! I LOVED when Harry yelled at Ron like that! He needed it, stupid boy. I can't wait for Hermione to come out of her funk. I don't like her being all depressed and everything, it's not her! Also, the unhappy birthday thing was great! I can't wait to see what happens next! Also, I understand Ellie being depressed about becoming 20 (of course she had other reasons), I felt the same way. Officially an adult, officially getting old. Ugh! Why can't we stop growing up at 19? Great chapter!! Can't wait for more!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/22/05 Title: Chapter 7: Unwelcome Present

I love your subtlety in this chapter. You explained the things that happened so well, without saying the dreaded word *shiver*. So awful that Harry had to see it, and I totally understand his need to vomit. Wish the chapter was longer cause I love this story so much, but it was great just the same. Good job! Again, can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: I'm a firm believer that your imagination goes places that the written word doesn't. That's why i left as much as possible unsaid. The next couple of chapters are going to be longer and the next one is already in queue.



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/12/05 Title: Chapter 5: Coming of Age

Ah I love it! This story... I can't decided which is my favorite chapters! They're all soooo wonderful and equally perfect! You're an amazing writer! Can't wait for another one!

Author's Response: Is it really that hard to pick a favourite? That's terrific. Thank you for the lovely words of support.



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/04/05 Title: Chapter 31: Ron's Questions

Don't jump too high? Are you crazy?! That's the funniest, happiest thing I've ever read! Poor, poor pregnant Ellie... Morning sickness sucks I've heard. And it's not just morning, it's ALL day long. *sighs wistfully* She and Charlie'll have a cute baby. Don't you dare hurt her offspring, Natalie! It's evil and wrong. I really liked this chapter. They always get better and better as they go on! I can't wait for another. Hopefully after I get back from church? *hint hint* Hehe! G'day to ya!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/24/05 Title: Chapter 11: Anxious Alley

Gee whiz, I felt nervous for Harry also!! Great chapter! Can't wait again for more!!!

Author's Response: Good job you don't have to wait long for more. The next chapter is up.



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/05/05 Title: Chapter 35: The World's Greatest Wizard

I'm using your story as a procrastination tool again, dang it. And now, after such an awfully sad and happy chapter, I don't know if I can concentrate on the story I have to write for history! I loved it Nat! I'm soooo sad it's almost over. You're extremely talented. I was going to suggest in my last review, a sequel, but after getting rid of all those Death Eaters, I'm not sure you've got anyone to conflict with anymore. But, I'd be more than happy, if you write more on this story, to read it. Hehe! Anyways, thanks for quick updates, as usual!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/06/05 Title: Chapter 4: The Second Return

So cute!! I love the warm fuzzies and Fred and George crack me up!! I love all the updates so quickly! Love it, love it, love it! There, did I say it enough? You're an amazing writer and awesome in descriptions! Amazing job! Can't wait for #5!!

Author's Response: I love the warm fuzzies too (like you hadn't guessed that yet). Thank you for all your wonderful praise and I can't wait to see what you think of the rest of the story.



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/02/05 Title: Chapter 26: Caught In The Lion's Den

Ooh, wow! I really like this chapter! I love how you dragged Hermione, literally back into the picture! She needed to be back with them and Ginny being off was a great idea! I'm glad they noticed something was up, cause they'd be thick if they didn't after she dumped him like that. So... the question is... Where's Ginny? I can't wait for it to update again!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/03/05 Title: Chapter 29: Romantic Interludes

So sweet. So... geez, I loved it! I love your story so much! Ellie's pregnant, isn't she? Yeah right a whole lotta chocolate frogs. Girls are built to be able to down a ton and a half of chocolate without getting sick, it's in out genes. I just know she's prego! Can't wait for another update!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/25/05 Title: Chapter 12: Death Eater Encounter

I was sooo worried for a moment! I'm suprised Ellie didn't scream and cry her head off when she pulled her arm back in socket... it hurts like a mother! Like so bad, you want to puke. Ouch... Anyways, great as always! Loved it more than words can describe!

Author's Response: It hurts like hell, doesn't it? She was too busy thinking about other things at the time. Glad you liked it!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/29/05 Title: Chapter 19: Ghoul Are You?

Ahhh! You went and ruined two perfectly good couples!!! But, ya had to... Like Pomfrey said to Ellie, there's not a good relationship without the making up after a good fight! Love it and hate it all the same! Can't wait for the next!!

Author's Response: I know what i did, and i feel terrible for it, i really do. It would be a little unrealistic if Harry/Ginny/Ron/Hermione all lived in this happy little bubble. That's not how it works (unfortunately) and it's how you deal with it that makes or breaks the relationship.



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/05/05 Title: Chapter 36: To Brighter Days

You're so good at making me cry! That was so sweet! And I was sooo right about her being pregnant. I know how to tell it miles away, I swear! Hehe! Anyways, another GREAT chapter. Now, if you don't mind, I need to actually do my homework. Darn procrastination!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/02/05 Title: Chapter 27: Ginny In Danger

I think you're spoiling me! I can't get enough of this story! I'm so glad you explained why Ellie could pop in and out of places. I was starting to wonder about that! This is such a great story! I LOVE reading more and more and I'm sooooo glad you are able to update so fast!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/23/05 Title: Chapter 10: Making A Speech

Can't stop giggling! Poor Ron, is he gonna pass out? Hehehe! Loved Fred and George's invention! Very practical! Aww... I think I need another tissue! *sniff*

Author's Response: Ron's going to make, he's pale but he'll live. Here's another tissue *passes the box over again*



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/28/05 Title: Chapter 16: Hermione's Surprise

Once again, brilliant! I love how Harry reacted at the "they almost did IT," part! I think I would have done the same if my little brother was in that situation... well, first, I'd punch him for being so stupid, then I'd go into the big sister role and totally side with his girlfriend (I tend to like her better. hehe!) Anyways, I loved how romantic Ron got and it totally went with what happened with Charlie when he was asking Ellie to marry him! I love it bunches! Can't wait for the next chapter! I appreciate it a lot how quickly you get these out to your avid readers. Great job!!!

Author's Response: I really appreciate you taking the time to review the story. Thanks for your encouragement.