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09/15/05

Reviews by RoxyMarie

Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power by mrsgeorgeweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After the trauma of his sixth year Harry and his friends enter into their last year of magical education at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The trio try to balance passing their exams with fighting Voldemort and planning their futures. Despite all that, romance will fill the air with wedding bells ringing out. This year Harry is in more danger than ever when his enemy finds new ways to try and get the Boy Who Lived. Voldemort’s presence will be felt more than ever as he steals more lives; can Harry find himself before its too late? And what adventures will he have along the way?

If you haven’t read Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived then I would strongly urge you to do so because if you don’t then this story probably won’t make any sense to you. Be helpful to writers by Reading and Reviewing!

The very last chapter of this fic has been reworked. Please re-read there's more about the kids in there! Also my author's notes on the final chapter have also been added. Ten part fic related to this going up shortly!!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/03/05 Title: Chapter 30: Bad Dreams

Good chapter! Can't wait for the next! Kinda sad that Harry didn't talk to Ellie when he had the chance, but that's him. He can't bring down someone's good mood. Anyways, loved it as always!!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/30/05 Title: Chapter 22: Moving On

I'd slap Ron silly! Stupid boy! He's not Sirius or James, he can't play the field! Stupid boy! He needs to get over himself and get Hermione back!!! I can't wait to read more! As always, it's wonderful!!!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 24: Hurting Hermione

You are so the worst at making me cry! First the happy wedding, then this? Poor Hermione! How could you do that to her? How's she ever going to recover? If Ellie STILL can't get over her parents' deaths, how can Hermione? I need more! I need another update!!! Please!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/04/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Best Summer

I love it!! It's so great how like JKR, you were able to explain the goings on prior to the story without it sounding forced. Great job! I was thrilled to read the conversation between Fred, George, and Harry! It's always great when those two become overprotective of their "little Gin-Gin"! Awesome story! Can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: I have to say that the summary of past events wasn't my favourite bit of this chapter. It needed to be said but at the same time we're all faithful followers of HP and know exactly what has happened in the past 6 years. That was why i tried to keep it brief and i'm glad you don't think that it sounded forced. As for Gred and Forge, you can have so much fun writing that pair, wait 'till you see the eve of the wedding!

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Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/13/05 Title: None

Hey, I just wanted to drop you a review. It's well written, good imagery with the description of the pregnant woman collapsing. Seems to be within cannon, I like it! Good job!

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Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/07/05 Title: None

Hey Punk'in! Congrats on the story! Glad ya got it posted! #2 is ready for you!! Great job!

Author's Response: haha thanks Roxy! You know it wouldn't be here if it wasn't for you! You're awesome! i can't wait until Ch. 2 is posted! thanks for the review! :D

Ginny's Midnight Drama by Mind_Over_Matter

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
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Oh no! Ginny has found her in an emergency situation of dire need. Harry lies before her and Ron and Hermione are long gone. Whatever shall she do? Well, it looks like Ginny is feeling a bit Dramatic.

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/18/05 Title: Chapter 1: Wake Up, Harry!

Here I am, reviewing for you at 4 in the morning after a very disappointing movie *cough#4cough* Anyways, as I've already told you... "hehehe" how silly funny! I'm glad you're gettin over ur posting anxiety!

Author's Response: Hey Roxy xD Thanks for leaving me a review... it's so weird to be on the other end of these author Response things! That's such a shame... There's no way they got get the plot fully in. I fear for when I see it. And you wait, #5 (is there going to be one? *Kinda hopes not*) will be worse. This one is rather silly, but now I'm free to post the rest of them. All my stories have got to make up... I don't know, at least 30 chapters between them. Thanks again, and I hope you're now in bed!

The End of Only One Beginning by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry had been talked into going back to Hogwarts for his last year, and yet, throughout it, he had been leaving the school very frequently to do as Dumbledore wished. It is here, in a small glen that the fate to the Wizarding world is brought foward. Since neither can live while the other survives, who will be the one to stand up? This is my imagining of the last chapter of the seventh book. HBP spoiler, but really, everyone on this site should have read it by now.

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/19/05 Title: Chapter 1: The End of Only One Beginning

Cute story! I like it!

Black Moon Dance by Ausra Cerise

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It’s the Marauders last year together, and they’re more cunning and mischievous then ever. But Voldemort and his followers are at their peak and fears are rising. Blood runs colder as Lily's life takes a turn for the worse. Troubles are thickening. It seems James and his friends has more coming their way then they're ready for.

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/02/05 Title: Chapter 1: Turn Around

Great start! Great descriptions. I really like your story. It reads really well! I hope you're able to update often!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll try to update as soon as I can!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/02/05 Title: Chapter 1: Turn Around

I really like your story! You've got a really great start and I can't wait to read more! I'm already attached to it! James and Siruis' pranks against Snape and Narcissa was perfect! Great! I love your descriptions! So clear and concise! I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thanks again, RoxyMarie!

Harry Potter and the Time of the Lost by Black Iris

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: SEQUEL to Phoenix Song: Harry survived his attack on Voldemort, but barely. Nursed back to health by creatures that knew more of the darkness of the world then even Voldemort. Harry finds himself with a new future ahead of him and a new life and an even greater darkness that he, himself, had created.

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: The End of the Beginning

Wow, what a great start to the sequel! I knew you couldn't kill Harry with the pure magic. He's too good! I can't wait for he and his daddy to meet again as well! Can't wait for the next update!

One Life Owed by mrsgeorgeweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is yet another spin-off from my main fic. In it we discover the reason for Snape’s allegiance with the Order and Jane Potter.

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: One Life Owed

Whata great spin off! I really liked it. One time though, you called her, through Dumbledore, Elizabeth. I can't remember, but is that her middle name or something? Dunno. It was still great! As close to what we believe to be the real scenario as it could be with OCs. Great writing! Can't wait for the next fic from you!

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Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/16/05 Title: None

Such a great story! Shopping for Slytherins! I love it!

Author's Response: Thankyou! You'll find out just what they plan to do in due time.... Evil scheme.

Harry Potter and the Mind's Eye by GhostCoon

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry begins to put his plans for defeating Voldemort into action, but runs into unexpected trouble that will make his task considerably more difficult. Harry will have to change his plans completely and rely on his friends more than ever as he battles Death Eaters and destroys Horcruxes, often inches from death itself. Seventh Year, post-HBP. H/G and some R/H. A lot of action, a little romance, a great read!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 07/08/06 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Sweet story. I enjoyed reading it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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