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Blood of the Heart by kjpzak

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: 7th Yr Sequel to Ancient Magic. It is now known the power of immortality resides inside Harry and Ginny. Will their combined powers be enough to protect them from the Dark Lord?
Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/07/05 Title: Chapter 27: Lady of the Lake

Do I say amazing too much? I think I do! That along with awesome are usually the words that describe your story, but tonight, I don't feel those two words do it justice. Your plot lines are always so intricate and meticulous. I can't help but be drawn into every scene. Your attention to detail is percise, making me feel as if it could all be real. I love how well thought out this whole story is! You and your betas are doing a wonderful job! I wish there was a higher praise than that, but my brain is test-fried and I can't think through the fuzzies. Congrats on another great chapter!! I was dying waiting for it!! By the way, have you ever considered writing professionally for a living? I think you'd be perfect!!

Author's Response: Wow! I feel warm and fuzzy all over - or is that your test brain seeping through the internet? What a wonderful compliment - writing professionally! I'd love to try if the right idea comes along. Have any? :)



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/20/05 Title: Chapter 29: The Tomb

NOOOOOOO!!! YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS! YOU'RE EVIL, MEAN, CRUEL! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU'RE DOING THIS TO US!!!! *Takes a deep breath* Okay, I'm okay... I think. I don't really think you're mean and cruel and evil, well sorta, the way you're leaving us like this to go off on your vacation. Ugh! Not fair, you get to know the rest of the story before us! *Whines* I want more!!! Hope you have a great vacation and thoroughly enjoy torturing your faithful readers! *Sticks tongue out*

Author's Response: No!!! I'm a nice person, really! :) I've got my mod checking into why the last part of my chapter has been cut off. I'm really sorry about that. It's a doozy of an ending, too...



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 10/10/05 Title: Chapter 25: Acceptance

Man, oh, man, I was on the edge of my seat waiting for this chapter to finally be posted! I've been checking on it since last night!! I'm so excited it finally posted! I LOVE THIS STORY! It's so amazing! I love how you portray Bill in this chapter! You totally captured his emotions! Awesome! *Going to wait impatiently, but quietly for next week's update*

Author's Response: Hee, hee - lucky thing my mod was working today! :) I'm so glad you liked Bill - he's so cool! Thanks!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 10/02/05 Title: Chapter 24: Simple

Wow, you're descriptions are so amazing. You've got a wonderful gift of words, the way I strive to write. Every word you write has it's proper place in the story. (Does that make sense? I kinda lost myself for a second. My mind didn't write that.) Anyways, this is always the first story I check to see if it's been updated! Congrats on such a wonderful story! It's widely loved as you can tell by the reviews. Can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response: LOL - thank you! You make me smile! I try to put the chapters in the queue on Sunday nights, and my mod is wonderful about getting them out of it in a day or two. See you next week!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 10/20/05 Title: Chapter 26: Directions

Oh my goodness, I can't believe I didn't leave you a review!!! Bad Roxy! Sorry, please forgive me!!! I love your story so much! I find myself checking from Monday morning until it posts to get the next chapter. I crave your updates! It's an amazing story with an amazing plot! Keep up the great work! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: LOL - you did leave me a review - it just for some reason ended up on Chapter one. :) But my ego never minds being told again how much you enjoy the story. Until next week!



Power The Dark Lord Knows Not by PatronyBologna

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Post OotP:





His vision blurred by blood and the lack of glasses he willed himself to his desk grabbing for his quill, ink, and parchment. Unable to stand, he slumped back down to the floor. Hands shaking wildly, he managed to write one word.


The wait is over...


“You know what they say, keep your friends close and your enemies even closer.” Ron turned the page for Hermione and scanned the list of cruel and unusual jinxes and spells that he thought were a shoo-in for an unforgivable.


~Patrony :)<

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 10/10/05 Title: Chapter 18: When It Comes Right Down To It

*Dancing around the living room* Yay!!! He finally kissed her!! Hehehe! I can't wait for the next update! Please do it sooooooon! I can't ever get enough of this story! It's amazing!

Author's Response: There's lots of dancing going on! We should stop for some refreshements!! lol I'm working on it RoxyMarie, unfortuantely, my brain is a bit taxed at the moment, but I'm working on it! You'll just have to savor this one, it was a long time coming. Thanks!!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 10/05/05 Title: Chapter 17: Dishes

Dang it!!! Why does stupid Harry have to have a stupid conscience??? Just kiss her already! I LOVE your story and I can't WAIT for the next update!! I must've read this story 3 times already and every time it get better and better!

Author's Response: Dang it all anyway! lol Stupid Harry... Well, he's honorable. You wouldn't want him snogging another guys girl do you? Three times... holy cow! Thanks RoxyMarie, next chapter should be up soon, with any luck!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 12/28/05 Title: Chapter 20: Eleven Fifty-Seven

Great chapter! I loved it a lot! I definitely can't wait for the next one! Your story is one of my all time favorites and I just can't seem to get enough of it! Hope you're doing well and had a wonderful Christmas!!

Author's Response: All time favs? Wow, I'm really honored... really!! Doing much better, thank goodness, so I can get on with writing. Hope you holidays were smashing RoxyMarie! ~Patrony :)



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 10/29/05 Title: Chapter 19: Write And Wrong

Oh yay! The stupid git finally asked her out officially! I must mention I LOVE fluff! It makes the world go round! I hope Hermione's okay, I know she will be though! Amazing chapter! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yes, he finally asked her out! Fluff does make the world go round... when it's done right. Hermione?? We'll see. Thanks again for the chocolate RoxyMarie! ~Patrony :)



Power of the Prophecy by the_bartender713

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Year six begins in the_bartender's crazy concoction that is the life of Harry Potter. Add one part Harry, two parts prophecy, a mixture of Ron and Hermione, a dash of Ginny, a splash of Dumbledore (and garnish with a certain new knightly character to add a little mystery!)...


Pour over the ice in Lord Voldemort's heart and voila!


You've got yourself a Power of the Prophecy Cocktail, sure to mess you up, spin you around, make you question your motives and turn your wizarding world up-side down.





Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 10/25/05 Title: Chapter 9: Draco's Detour

I love your stories! I just read all three of them and I can't wait for another update on this one. You're a great writer! I'm anxious to find out what happens with Draco and Harry's detention and what Dumbledore has to say to Harry. I'm really curious to know if he's EVER going to tell Harry the secrets he's keeping. Great job!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you read all of them! Thank you so much for the compliment! I hope you'll keep reviewing- and don't worry- DD's secret is coming in the next 2 chaps!!! EEK!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/27/05 Title: Chapter 12: Detention with Draco

I like the approach you're taking. It's good to see Malfoy being nice for once. Also, I LOVE that you have Harry calling him Ferret!!! It's so funny! Great chapter! Hope you update again soon!

Author's Response: Malfoy will ALWAYS be Ferret in my book--- remember that. :-) As soon as the queue opens after Hols, I'll update again!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 10/30/05 Title: Chapter 10: The Second Meeting

Wow, amazing chapter! I agree with hpboy! Harry needed to see it for himself! I can't wait to find out why Dumbledore was crying!!! You've got a great story going on! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've submitted the next chapter, so as soon as Bethany can get to it, it will be up! Thanks again for reviewing!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 01/18/06 Title: Chapter 16: Memories in the Making

Aww... how sweet. I loved it! Can't wait for another chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! New material coming soon...



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/02/05 Title: Chapter 11: Albus' Secret

Wow! Amazing!! What a great chapter! I can't believe all the little details you've managed to tie into your story such as the Pensieve door being open and the Chocolate Frog card. I think you're doing a wonderful job with this story and I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: thank you so much! I really love how JK left us with all these little things to work with that seem so insignificant- then you read stories where Trevor the Toad is relaly like, Neville's bewitched Grandfather!! thanks again!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 01/25/06 Title: Chapter 17: The Weasel and The Ferret

What'd ya do with the real Malfoy? What's the deal with the change? Other than my temporary confusion as to who the imposter is, it was a great chapter. I'm glad Ron lost. Brings his chess ego into check. He needed it.

Author's Response: The "real" malfoy? like the "real mcCoy?" Ummm... I've hidden him in my closet for me to psychoanalyze as i please... and also because he's a pretty boy and WOULD be only a few years older than me in the 'real world' (that is, should he be real) b/c the trio etc. were TECHNICALLY born in like, 1981, and I was born in 1984.... ah yes, the real Draco Malfoy... the one all those online quizzes tells me I'm going to marry (even though they ALSO swear I'm a gryffindor)....



Circus Ultima by Sirius Intent

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A return to Grimmauld Place prior to Harry’s sixth year at Hogwarts places all of the inhabitants at risk from a Dark and Malevolent Force.

Quote:

But now the circle was to be broken. Harry felt a sweat break out at the back of his neck. He felt himself shudder.

Harry had never been one to believe in premonitions, but at that moment he had seen clearly that the destruction of his life and the life of wizard-kind was but a moment away.

Not only that but he had also just seen the source of that destruction.

Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 10/26/05 Title: Chapter 24: Re-entering the Atmosphere

Aww great chapter! Harry's stupid though... He can't expect to kiss her like that and her not hold onto him for dear life when he begins pushing her away. He's playin' her and he's being stupid. Loved it though!! Can't wait for more!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 10/21/05 Title: Chapter 22: Holding it together

Wow, this story is amazing. The emotions you convey are so realistic and just... wow. I couldn't stop reading from the moment I started. I can't believe you don't have more reviews than this!! You've got an amazing gift with writing that a lot of people can't get. You've got the ability to discern emotions and portray them for the reader to get sucked into. A lot of stories are just words and actions, no real meaning and emotion behind them, but you've got it all. I'm entranced in your writing. By all accounts, this has got to be one of the top stories I've had the opportunity to read. And just to let you know, even though HBP has come out, it's still intriguing to read pre-HBP stories. It ended so awfully that it's hard to imagine that life for Harry goes on after that. It was bad enough life without Sirius Black. Now, a life with no Albus Dumbledore is like a life without hope. So, I do hope that the release of HBP won't constrict your ideas of a sequel to this story in the future. Great job on capturing attention... I'm going to post it as a must-read on the Forums.

Author's Response: Hi there. Thanks for the great review. I'm really glad you are enjoying reading it as much as I am enjoying writing it. Check back soon for update!



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/30/05 Title: Chapter 28: Final Thoughts

Great ending! Sad to see the story end, but you rounded it up great! Any chances of a sequel?



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/07/05 Title: Chapter 27: Dazed, Beautiful and Bruised

Awesome chapter! So sweet.... so sad.... I love it! I love it sooooooo much! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: All that remains is the epilogue...sniff.! So check back for it...will try and get it submitted early next week..



Reviewer: RoxyMarie Signed
Date: 11/03/05 Title: Chapter 26: An eye for an eye.

Awesome chapter! I really enjoyed Harry's little monologue at the end. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks again. Will try and get around to posting it today.