Interesting... is Dumbledore ever going to WAKE UP in the presence of the 4? Geez, that old man... Good chapter. Wished the battle would have been more elaborated, but it was pretty good. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Harry has some thoughts about Dumbledore in Chapter 6. This duel was just to introduce them as a fighting team.
Thanks for the comments.
Great chapter! I've been waiting for this to update forever!!! Yay! I finally getta read it! I can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: Thanks... Thanks... Thanks... You 'Rox' ;) ;)
Great story! I hope you update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review! Next chapter is in queue :)
Wow, you're a great writer! I really like you style and the story you've got going on is so interesting! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the story. I'll update soon, I promise!
*tapping fingers together* hm... interesting... I can't imagine Harry being that oblivious as he passes people in black robes with death eater masks... especially after his stint in GOF, the, OOTP, then HBP, he knows what his death eaters look like. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Messrs. Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs -- These names are known by every person in Hogwarts. These names, and an envelope with a scarlet wax seal bearing the letters: MWPP.
The teachers dread it, the students revel in it...but who are these 'Marauders,' as they are called? That's just it. Nobody knows. Most every prank Hogwarts sees is at the hands of these mysterious Marauders, and the perpetrators always walk free. They could never be caught. You can’t catch phantoms.
Lily Evans is just as curious as the next student as to who these Marauders are, but her curiosity is transformed into a hungry need, when she receives a letter herself from a certain Mr. Prongs.
[This story is slightly AU, but more on that in the author's note at the end.]
Awesome story! I love it! It's sooo sweet! Can't wait to see where you take it!! Great job!
I just want to be the first to review. I really like the descriptions you use. I can't wait to see where you take this story and where Harry's been for that period of time! Good job
Aww... poor Harry. I hope he's okay! Can't wait for another update!
How sad! This is the saddest thing I've ever read, but unique in the fact most people, me included, have Harry save the day. I'm anxious to see where you take this. Good job!
Gee whiz, I go and see Harry Potter 4 again and now there's two chapters up?! You're so amazing! I love this story so much! It was all I could do not to laugh out loud at Ellie and Charlie and her confession to Pomfrey! It was so funny! You're story, I don't think I have to say it again, but I will anyways, is so wonderful, amazing, and awesome, etc., etc., etc.
Author's Response: That'll teach you to go and see movies while my story is in the process of getting posted! You are a wonderful, amazing and awesome reader and i'm delighted to have you around. Thank you for a terribly sweet review.
I don't like you very much right now... *sobs* I want Ron and Hermione happy! Maybe not... what's a good story without a good twist and a fight? Can't wait again for another update!
Author's Response: I know, i don't like myself very much right now, if that makes you feel any better? Very true, it isn't a good story if unexpected things don't happen.
*Tear* I love a good wedding. I think I need a hankie.
Author's Response: I love a good wedding too, they're so beautiful! Have a hankie , dear. *passes the box of tissues over*
*Sigh* Great chapter! Almost made me cry... So sad to think of all the potential James and Lily had before they were killed. I like how you're able to capture that emotion and that attachment that's sure to happen between teachers and students. I also really enjoy the confidence you've given Harry. He's grown up a lot in your story! Can't wait for more Harry/Ginny action! I can't get enough!
Author's Response: There are things that come to you as you grow older and confidence is one of those things. Especially if you find that group of friends that mean the world to you.
Whata great animal to pick for Ellie to transform into!!! Hehe!! She's gonna live! I hope at least that was your intentions for her Animagus form. Otherwise, watch your step. J/K!! I loved this chapter! Can't wait to read your one shot! Also, more on this story! I'm soooo happy you found a good way for Harry to kill Voldie. The white, pristine, power of love for those around him. Now, Harry gets to propose to Ginny in the hospital wing! His favorite place in the world! He spends enough time there anyways for it to be his favorite, right? Hehe! Loved it! Hope it'll update again really, really soon!
Awww... gee whiz. Ron's such a sap! I love him! Great chapter! Happy he finallly sucked up the courage!! I love it!!
Awesome chapter! Soooo funny! I love that you've created the Potters to have been such a noble family line. It makes the story that much better! I'm ready for the wedding!!! Can't wait!
Author's Response: I can't help it if the stuff JKR has given us leads us to believe that they've had quite a noble herritage. The wedding's on its way!
How embarrassing! I feel for Harry and Ron! Gee whiz! I'm super glad I never had to endure one of those "sex talks" with my parents! I would have DIED! Great chapter! Can't wait for another!!!
Author's Response: I didn't have to have one either, phew! The next is already on it's way to you now.
I can't believe it's over! It just started! I'm sooo sad! Anyways, great chapter! I loved it so much! Wonderful, amazing, captivating, etc. story! I give you 10 stars outta ten. If there were more to give, I would. You've got such a talent and a huge following as well. I'd love to read anything else your mind could come up with, especially anything that could continue this story. I love your OC! She's a brilliant character and I love her as if she's one of JKR's own! Well, I'm sad this is the last reveiw I'll get to submit on this story. Wish it could continue forever, but all good things must come to an end and you pulled it off perfectly. Congrats!
How great! I loved it! Can't wait for the continuation! I hope Ellie and baby stay okay. I'm so glad you made Snape jump in front of her. He was finally good for somethin' after all these years of bein' good for nothin', right? Hehe! Please, please, please don't let anything happen to Ellie and baby! I know that stupid prophesy says she's gotta save Harry one more time, but you can't kill her!
They need to let the Dementors just kiss him and get it over with. Don't they know the Malfoys are good at gettin' outta things? They're very slick and conniving. It'd just be best to kill em all. Hehe! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!! Harry was all scared! I love Ellie's little "I'll throw your to the Centaurs" speech it was definitely what every good older sister would say, trust me, I know this one. I've had to use a similar line several times on my little brother. Hehe! WELL, great, awesome, stupendous chapter!!