Hi everyone bothering to read this! I'm Mary Kate, and I'm 16. I hope you like my one shots and Last Chance, which has recently been overhauled. The next chapter is in queue.
I am a Beta for Perfect Imagination under the name MaryKatePeverell. If you want me to beta for you, you can email me or search for me on the PI site. My certificate is at the bottom of this page.
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Thanks, Knattle!
Knattle is amazing...
Upcoming stories:
"Banking on Happy Endings"- Hermione's POV, teeny vignette/missing moment of internal dialogue. done.
"Courage". Neville/Other character. Set alongside HBP but with little Harry involvement. Probably around 5 chapters. almost done.
"Forever". A Ron/Hermione one-shot about summer at the Burrow post-DH. Very fluffy. done.
Sequel to Beyond King's Cross. Not started.
P.S. I know "phoenix" is spelled incorrectly in my penname. I did that on purpose so it would be easier to find in the directory.. lol.
Recently Added: "Snapshots"
Next Up: "Maybe"- a H/G oneshot, and Ch7 of LC, and a teeny-tiny Hermione POV missing moment/ vignette.
Current Faves:
Cat and Mouse- Red Jumpsuit
Time Bomb- Faber Drive
The Glass Parade- Cary Brothers
Shine on- JET
Little House- the Fray
Lonliest Girl in the World- Cary Brothers
24 Story Love Affair- Faber Drive
that was soooooo funny! spider was soooo sweet, but ya know, i dont even like spiders. if it was like a teddy bear or something it wouldn't be creepy at all... lol. good job this fic is cool!!! even tho hermione is ooc. 10/10 good job!!! -Mary Kate
don't let your mom make you stop! I'll be sooo sad. (i know how you feel cuz my mom threatens too. but won't it look good on my college applications?) anyway, this chapter was cute and fluffly. I liked it, but hated "steph" as she wants to be called. the only thing is, I know you said Alex is getting over it, but her brother just DIED. wouldn't she be a little more upset??? Anyway, can't wait for the next chappie!!!
Author's Response: She is VERY upset, but she's doing her best to hide it. She feels as if she must be 'strong' for TJ's memory. The topic isn't over yet, and it will be discussed in more chapters.
this story is great! keep it up- you're on my (very selective) favorites list! btw- check out my James/Lily story, Last Chance please! r/r please!
great story! you're on my very selective favorites list! btw- please r/r my James & Lily story, Last Chance! It's new!
hi! i love your story! I had to read the whole thing again coz I needed tpo remember what the plot was... I was sooo sad about TJ! He was the best! And plz plz plz don't kill Alex. Really. You are cruel if you do!!!!!!! can you r and r my lily/ james fan fic, Last Chance? Thx! I'll check for new chaps on yr story soon! (yr on my favorites
Author's Response: I did read your story. I just can't figure out how to reveiw it! Could you tell me how? I thought it was really good, by the way (I'll go into more detail in a review).
I agree w/ Lady Snuffles (I did think of it on my own tho :)!) Anyway, plz don't kill Alex, I will be soo sad!!!!!
fave chapter titles- confrontations, surprises, forgive me?
fave characters- sirius, remus, alex
(and Lily and James)
how come you never reply to reviews?
10/10! luuuurve it!
Author's Response: Sometimes I reply, if there's an issue or a question, but I'm usually just so busy, and when I'm not, I write, but I still don't have a lot of time. I try to use the author's notes to answer general questions and things.
really liked this, it was sweet. very humorously written, and I lovvvve James' attitude. Can't wait to read your other one! btw- will you r/r my story? It's lily/james, called Last Chance. I only have 2 reviews! Thanx, and thanx for the great short story!
sweet, though I don't think fred and george would do that to poor "mione". I think it would have embarrased her more than you wrote. anyway, really cute!
funny! I laughed out loud. never thought i'd see the day when A) baby snapes. and he's married!!!! B) I actually like draco in this, not hate him, want to mash him into a pulp.
funny! I laughed out loud. never thought i'd see the day when A) baby snapes. and he's married!!!! B) I actually like draco in this, not hate him, want to mash him into a pulp.
omg, I almost cried. wow! love how harry's in first person, soooo good!!!!! love it!!!! you are so going on my favorites list!
Graet story! Just finished chapter two, and I'm putting you on my favorites (only a select few make it on there). The writing stule is very elegant. Keep it up!!
Author's Response: Thanks for checking it out. Hope you enjoy the rest. :-)
that was HILARIOUS! i was laughing like a maniac as my family put lights on the Christmas tree (I can't help because I have an injured knee) and they thought I was insane, as usual. I especially liked the end, nice twist. And the brother's reactions were PERFECT. Specially Fred and George, as we know they are VERY protective of their baby sister. :) Great job, 10/10!
sooo funny! luv it! never thought s/r would work so wonderfully! but wouldn't they have gotten together sooner....? like in school. poor sirius black fanclub, anyway.
This story is amazing! I just read the whole thing (it took me awhile). I really hate Miranda and it was very gratifying when Hermione slapped her! lol. (seriously, Miranda is a cold hearted b*tch and I want her to DIE! Why is Ron always so blind???) I really liked this chapter (it wasn't boring at all), especially because of Viktor making a return. I wish we could see how Fred and George take care of Hannah on tuesdays! That would be cute, since I love Fred and George, they're my favorite. Anyway, keep up the awesome work and I'll check back SOON for updates!!! bye, and don't forget you rock Dawn! -Mary Kate XO
this was really sweet i also thought he was going to give her the knitting needles, but this was much more thoughtful, although the exact function of rthe needles is slightly confusing and I didn't really get how they worked. it's probably just me. ;) great job!!
but luna is not a "ditzy blonde". ditzy means stupid or bimbo-esque. Luna is definately a "dreamy" blonde.
that was cute. i normally love one shots, they can be so simple and deliver a very powerful blow. I liked this, but I thought it was kind of... lacking. somewhere. maybe the characters were a bit "flat" as my English teacher would say. But, I think it was more the topic than your writing style. I was in the mood for a one-shot, this was the first I saw, so I clicked on it... and here we are. I don't know... Lily finding out she's prgnant is original, but not too much action. 7/10. good job! (plz r/r my lily/james, Last Chance! I definately accept harsh criticism, I love it cuz it makes me a better writer. I'm not trying to be mean with yours!!!!!) ~luv, mary kate~
Author's Response: Hmmm... I understand what you are saying, that there is no action, but it's morning sickness. It's in the early morning. Not quite sure how you could apply action. Well, thanks for the review. :)
Grrr, just got Avada-Kedavra'd. What's going on?
Author's Response: Hmmm... I understand what you are saying, that there is no action, but it's morning sickness. It's in the early morning. Not quite sure how you could apply action. Well, thanks for the review. :)
Grrr, just got Avada-Kedavra'd. What's going on?
I really like this story so far! I think you did a great job of inventing your own character! r&r my fanfic, please? Last Chance. It's a James/Lily too. anyway, great job!! 100/10!!!