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Date: 01/09/06 Title: None
Wowz, interesting idea about Godric Gryffie's shield...this is getting interesting, I am really curious! Lolz, don't keep me waiting, update quickly. 11/10 and 6 stars out of 5.
Date: 10/25/05 Title: None
wow, great plot! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep writin! 1million(and 1)/10
Forever Yours by harry_potter_star
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
sigh.
Okay. Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay
For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!
James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.
Date: 04/05/06 Title: Chapter 18: Discussions on the Train
Challenge: They'll stay together as long as James stays with Callista, but this will lead to problems when (if) James breaks up with Callista because Lily loves James more but is going out with Robert and her life will become a huge mess and a massive dilemma. Great story!! I'm enjoying this!! 10000000000000000/10
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review! wow, you wouldn't believe it, but at the moment Lily in that answer is sounding like me! ::P well thought out answer! Im glad you like it, and thanks for the rating, whatd ya do, hack into the computer or something? jks :P
Date: 12/17/05 Title: Chapter 9: Second Year: Everything's Changing
I'm surprised nobody's mentioned this yet, but maybe it has something to do with what Calista told James about Lily in one of the previous chapters, about what happened on the way to Hogwarts? Maybe James hated Lily after Calista told him (or made up) that piece of information and decided that Calista had been a great help and was a great person. I certainly don't think that it was a love potion - they create obsession (remember Ron in HBP if you've read it?), so James would have probably gone ballistic about her. At the moment he seems pretty normal, and isn't acting strangely in any way. And I don't think James is mental - not after Callista told him lies about Lily - but he was foolish to believe what Callista said about her. Does that make sense?
Author's Response: Hey thanks for your review!! That's a really good theory, it's funny how people are convinced it's something magical. The thing is, I think that when I say to expect the unexpected, they immedietly expect it to be something incredibly complex, yet in doing that they would make a simple explenation o become the "unexpected" if you know what I mean? It's confusing, hey? James does seem pretty normal, you are right. it would be easy for him to believe what Calista told him about Lily. Thanks again!
Date: 12/26/05 Title: Chapter 11: Great Danger
My favorite scene was probably in this chapter when the girls were throwing abuse at james. Lol, that was funny, I was laughing my ass off at the way they kept talking over each other. Poor Lily, she must have been befuddled by the end of it! Great chappie, poor remus!! Please update soon (yeah i know, loads of ppl are saying that) and a godzillar - oops - godzillion out of 10!!
Author's Response: Hey Im not going to reply to anything for I while I am far too upset for any of that my bff betrayed me n every1 hates me bye
Author's Response: Hey sorry about before im all better now :) Oh goody, a scene that has been mentioned twice!! yay!! Lily would have been very confused!! I know I would have been! Oh, i would love to update soon, There is that tiny detail about the break though!! thanks for the review!!
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 8: The first Summer
10/10...I love the bit about the secret passageway, it sounded amazing. This is always why I wonder what it would be like if we could do magic for REAL!! I mean, that would be SO fun!
Keep writing!!!
Author's Response: Hey!! Thansk for your review!! gee, I never get tired of saying that!! OMG, It would so be cool if we could do magic for real! I wish..keep dreaming hey? I love the secret passageway scene; there are more to come, though not quite as dramatic lol! I will keep writing if veryone keeps readin!! Cyaz!!
Date: 12/20/05 Title: Chapter 10: Mixed Feelings
I stick to my story about what calista told him about lily. but a love potion might be involved in there *somewhere*...
Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review!! it;s good to know that you're sticking to your story, it's better thank just going along with what everyone else says, because for all you know, you may be the only one to think of that, and you may be right! Keep reading :)
Date: 01/09/06 Title: Chapter 12: Rescue Mission
Well I think Lily is going to go out with Robert first, then dump him, and get really miserable. Then, James will find out the truth about Calista and dump her, and go out with Lily. I think it will take about a year and a half. Great story, keep updating. I'm enjoying this!!! 11/10 and 6 stars out of 5.
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review! that's a good guess, lol, but i still can't say whether it's right! It's great to know you're enjoying this, thanks for the great rating lol cya
Date: 04/13/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Veil
wow, this is an incredible 'shortest story' (I just found the tens button, so cool!) Well done really meaningful. I love it!!! 10/10
Author's Response: :) I was actually rather suprised to find my poem in the tens. I didn\'t really think that it might be the shortest one on the site... anyway. Thanks for your review.
Harry Potter and Dumbledore's Secret by ImDeadSirius
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: As his seventeenth birthday approaches, Harry Potter has many things to think about-not the least of which is Voldemort. How he will defeat the Dark Lord, how his relationship with Ginny will work out, and whether he will attend Hogwarts are just some of the things in store this year! This is not just a romantic fanfic, but an attempt to write what could possibly be the seventh book. I have tried to emulate JKR and make my work fit into the world she has so masterfully created. The feedback I have received so far has been very positive.
Date: 12/09/05 Title: Chapter 3: The Discovery
Great story, I really love it. The flow is excellent. 10/10/10/10/10!!!!
Date: 11/24/05 Title: None
ha ha ha, v. funny! I love it! It's amazing! 1000000000000000/10
Author's Response: Wow, thanx!
Date: 12/17/05 Title: None
Harry blonde?? I can't imagine it! Bleurgh!!!! Great story, 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/02/06 Title: None
Hee hee, 1st review!!! LOL, your story is funny!!! Keep updating! 1000000000/10!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/24/05 Title: None
I can't wait to find out what happens to snape and HIS double! That chapter was hilarious!!! 100000/10
Author's Response: thanks! i like it too. one of my faves!
Date: 10/05/05 Title: None
Let me guess...Ron turns into Hermione? Or is that wrong?...great chapter but like everyone else says, there are a few grammar mistakes. It's not your fault, but you're improving and it will get better, trust me!
Author's Response: thanx! Well, I dun think what you said was right, cos it's not only Ron turns to Hermione.. Oh well, dun want to spoil it! :P thanks!
Date: 01/07/06 Title: None
Harry and Ron or Hermione and Ginny!!! I don't care which! Great story, did you get the idea from Rat Race?
Author's Response: Yeah! I love that movie so I decided to make a fan fic out of it.
When Lies Become the Truth by Winterrose
Rated: •Summary:
Date: 10/18/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Way Things Appear
My story: I was browsing through all the stories, with my head in my hand and a look of boredom on my face. I eventually came to your story, and it struck my attention.
In other words, I think it is a great story and I can't wait to see how it develops.
10/10!
Author's Response: I just submitted Chapter 2, so it should be out soon. Thanks for the review, and I hope to keep your attention. :)
So Few Days by FairyHunter
Rated: •Summary: Dumbledore contemplates Harry's death. [enough AU to choke a horse] [oneshot]
Date: 10/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: So Few Days
Great story, what happens next?
A Seed From The Ground by Seren
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Auror-in-training Kingsley Shacklebolt is learning to blend in with the crowd in downtown London. There, he meets a small, lost girl, and learns how much impact a simple act of kindness can really have.
Date: 05/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Seed From the Ground
That's so beautiful. It has a lot of meaning in it. I loved it and agree completely. I think it's inspired me to try a little harder!
Lessons by Hallie Black
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Professor Sprout has just given 7th year Gryffindors a new project, where the class, divided in pairs, has to raise a rare plant. What’s gonna happen when Lily finds out who her partner is? And how will she survive in his sole company?
Date: 11/03/05 Title: Chapter 3: Reviewing Decisions
great story, 1000000/10!
Author's Response: WOW!! Do I really deserve that much? Thanks!!!!