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I loved this chapter. It was funny, and the twins testing the marauders is great. The title of Sirius's book though, hmm...its a bit long..lol....maybe "there and back again, a marauders tale"...oh wait..is that taken already?
This is actually very good! I like how the story is progressing, the characters seem very true to form, and I like the pace. I find a lot of stories the author just wants to jump straight into their main idea. I like the fact that you're taking your time to develop the story.
Keep up the good work, and oh yes, update soon!!
--Sarakiel
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I've got thw hole plot of this fic written out, so I know where I'm going and what I've got to build up.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I've got thw hole plot of this fic written out, so I know where I'm going and what I've got to build up.
This is a nice story. Very rich in details and the pace is perfect. I'm not a H/Hr shipper but this seemed perfectly natural. Very well done. 10/10
Nice, Dumbledore huh ;)...bit of a Phoenix undertone there. I like the potential this story has. keep writing!
Author's Response: ues but if so clever who is it and if it is indeed Dumbldore how is he alive, tip chech all the books
Author's Response: ues but if so clever who is it and if it is indeed Dumbldore how is he alive, tip chech all the books
this is very well written. I like the small details you put in. A lot of good thought went into this. 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments!
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments!