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11/12/05

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Okay, what to say? Well, my name is Bonnie, I'm American, and I love to read and write fanfiction. There's nothing to say, really. I'm quite a boring person. Umm. *dies of sheer boredom*

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From the Notebooks of Hermione by SpellBound05

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This story is written from Hermione's notebooks, her point of view. Bare feet, Hogsmeade trips, quidditch games, and broken hearts.

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 07/29/06 Title: Chapter 21: Tick Tock, Tick Tock

Hey, Spellbound, once again you have me positively baffled with your fantastic story. This is practically the only Harry/Hermione story I've ever read (I'm not really a fan) and its GREAT! I almost died when you took that long break. Anyway, I loved how you've ended the chapter. It shows that although everyone's back together and happy, the looming threat of Lord Voldemort hasn't disappeared yet, as it would have by now it this were another story. Wonderful; keep up the good work!

Into The Unknown by Innocent Gurl

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Hermione finds herself trapped in Tom Riddle's time with a hand mirror and her wand as the only links back to the present. She goes through an adventure she never would have imagined and finds herself...having interesting conversations with Tom Riddle.

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 01/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice, very nice. Short, to the point, tidy, well written. I liked it very much. Keep up the good work. ~Bonnie

A Thousand Words by annie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: For the rest of the Ministry, the interdepartmental challenge was merely a failed attempt to restore trust between workers. But for Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger, it was the catalyst for an unexpected relationship built on passionate letters, concealed identities, and secret meetings – and the beginning of an end that neither of them could ever have imagined possible, not even in their wildest dreams.

Post-war. Based somewhat on the story of the Phantom of the Opera. Also contains R/Hr, so don't read if you can't stomach that ship.

Status: Complete. Thanks for reading, everyone!

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 07/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: To My Pen Pal

WOOHOO, TEN, TEN, TEN!! Fantastic! You've managed to make beautiful beginning to a beautiful story and I'm sure it'll turn out beautiful. I love it. All the characters are in character, the story doesn't interfere with canon (yet) and as far as I can tell, this will be great. But why did you change it? It used to be taking place at Hogwarts, from what I remember. Anyway, good luck and keep writing!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I chose to change the story because after not writing in it for a long time, I realised that I had a better idea for a story using a similar premise.

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 07/29/06 Title: Chapter 6: Darkness Deep as Hell

"How do you melt a heart of ice?"
I love you! This chapter is my favorite so far! You're a great writer. Although it isn't clear what happened to Draco when he lived in the forest or what type of person he's changing into, you seem keen on keeping the reader's attention on what Draco is now. Well, that's what I think. And sometimes I'm just weird like that. Ten! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 07/30/06 Title: Chapter 9: The Point of No Return

Ten! This chapter is quite different than the others before it. I really didn't think they would be able to converse so, as you put it, naturally. I liked the way this chapter was written. The way you wander off to other elements of the story and still manage to stay focused on the main idea of the chapter amazes me. Excellent work! Keep it up!

"Mum, Dad, It's Me... Harry." by Mudblood428

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 02/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

ZOMG! 10! Very good, wonderfully written, a real tear-jerker! Very, very good. Keep up the good work and stay humble! ~Bonnie

Journey On Water by SK witch

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After the downfall of Voldemort, Hermione decides to take a break and return to the Muggle world. Deciding to go on a Muggle cruise, Hermione realizes that it was the biggest mistake of her life. Now, she's stuck on a boat with her worst enemy. Fights and bickering continue to take place between them and maybe a little something else too...
Hermione makes new friends and meets up with an old friend, Jessie: an arrogant girl who treats Hermione like dirt and desperately tries to seek Draco's attention. (Slightly AU)

Thanks to some of my awesome readers, this story has been translated into Chinese and Vietnamese. For information on how you can see the translated version, please check my profile!

Status: Working on chapter 26. In the meantime, you can have a look at my new one-shot, Kiss Kiss, Bang Bang!

Please note that the date of my last update is incorrect. Apparently there are some glitches in the system regarding to this. Chapter 25 was updated on the 7/09/09!

Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill award in the Non-Canon Romance category

Please leave a review before you leave! It means a lot! You can check out the banner of this story on my author's page!

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 01/31/07 Title: Chapter 12: Confessions and Realizations

Okay, here's your review! I loved this chapter very much. I thought the conversation that Hermione and Malfoy had really brought out their feelings in ways that actions couldn't have, so kudos for that. *hands cookie* And also, the way you kept Malfoy in character is really good. I can't stand it when people are out of character, and you've stayed far away from that, so here's another cookie. Keep up the good work! This is a really great story! *hands a whole box of cookies* ~Bonnie

Author's Response: hahaha! Hey, Bonnie! Oh, it\'s awesome you liked this chapter, and I hope you enjoy my others as well! =D The hardest part is keeping them in character so it\'s great that you think that I did a good job on it *gladly accepts all the cookies* Thank you soo much for the review!

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 01/31/07 Title: Chapter 13: Draco and Jessie

Oh my God, that Jesse is such a @$$#^(*@^%@^&@^ ^@%#^))(@&^@@$! %@$$!^!*!!((@&!!!!!!! I love how you actually make the reader hate her as much as Hermione does. Once again, kudos on the in-character-ness of Malfoy and Hermione. Brilliant! ~Bonnie

Author's Response: *laughs* I hate her as much as you lol....she\'s also one of my favourite characters in a really wierd way (it\'s tons of fun writing out her part) !! Glad you\'re liking the way it\'s going so far *winks*

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 01/31/07 Title: Chapter 15: Amorodor

Yay! Hermione finally figured out that &^$%$@#!! Jesse's evil plot. I must say, this Malfoy/Hermione is unlike any I have ever read. Fantastic! I always love stories that unusual. I mean, a cruise? That's just a one of a kind thing, dude. Excellent! Keep up the good work! ~Bonnie

Author's Response: Thanks, Bonnie! I really have no idea how the idea popped into my head! Aw, but it\'s good to know I did a good job on it, eh? =D

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 01/31/07 Title: Chapter 17: Close Encounters

Very good, verrry good. That slag can't seduce Draco anymore without her perfume! I liked this chapter a whole lot, and I'm just waiting quite impatiently for the big kiss! Do hurry with that, will you? Hee-hee. ~Bonnie

Author's Response: hehe...That kiss everyone\'s been waiting for *drum roll* lol...I\'ll have to make a spectacular scene so that no one gets disappointed! *whew* That\'s gunna be reallly hard!

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 01/31/07 Title: Chapter 18: The Night Safari

Really good. Please update soon! I loved this chapter, and I think it's my favorite chapter so far. Keep up the good work and stay humble. ~Bonnie

Author's Response: Ooo thanks! *nods solemnly* I promise to keep up the good work and stay humble =D thank you sooo much for all the reviews! Seriously they mean tons and tons and tons....and tons.... *smiles*

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Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 10/14/06 Title: None

Come on! Update! THis is a great beginning to what I'm sure will be a great story, so please update!!!!

The Epic Tale of the Hogwarts Food-fight by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...

"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 01/17/07 Title: Chapter 3: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

Why did you stop? You're doing really well, and I can't wait until you update. It's really funny, but I'm pissed off as anything! Three chapters, and we're still not at the food fight? Keep up the good work! ~Bonnie

Author's Response: food fight is next. I will update in about five days when I get home off this ship.

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 01/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: First detention...87 more to go...

I think that was a very nice start to your story, Gin_Drinka! I liked how you brought out so much of your characters in the first chapter. I can see what the story is going to be about from here, and that's really great. Now, before I start to blabber, I'll just read the next chapter. Once I start, I usually can't stop. Heee.

Author's Response: well thanks. again. lol

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 01/15/07 Title: Chapter 2: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

God, I feel so dumb reviewing again when all I'm going to do is type up a bunch of nonsense. But I musst say, that Sirius and the sexual harassment comment he made made me laugh out loud and I'm alone here. I loved the chapter! Wonderful how you get your point across in many parts of the story without confusing the reader. Brilliant, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: thanks. I get such nice reviews from you.

Truth, Dare, or Double Dare by MrsRuebeusHagridDursley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Its a quiet sort of day in the Gryffindor common room. The Marauders decide to lighten things up with a little Truth or Dare. But, they think that's boring. They have their own version......

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 01/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Let the Game Begin

Oooh, will she do it? Don't keep us hanging! Update as soon as you can!! This game is so brilliant; I'm telling my friends about it. Good chapter, keep up the good work! ~Bonnie

Author's Response: You\'ll have to wait until Chapter 3 I\'m afraid.

Green is Not a Primary Color by Hermione_Rocks

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Salazar Slytherin fled Hogwarts a mere day ago. Now, scarred and pained, the Four Founders reflect on broken promises and the memories of what used to be.

Reviewer: Starlight23 Signed
Date: 01/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Green is Not a Primary Color

Oh my God, where are the reviews?? I loved this story and I thought it was really creative. The fact that there wasn't any speech in it must have made it somewhat difficult to form such a good one-shot, but that didn't seem to stop you!! Very good. Keep it up! ~Bonnie

Author's Response: My writing is often very dialogue driven, so this was somewhat of a challenge for me. I\'m glad you think I pulled it off though! :) Thanks for the nice review!