Hello everyone, my name is Lexi. I've been writing for as long as I can remember and fanfiction since I finished the sixth book. Most of my free time is dedicated to reading and writing... and as nerdy as it makes me sound I LOVE being in the colorguard in my school's marching band. Please leave reviews for my stories - should you read them - even constructive criticism... actually I encourage CC... I wouldn't be here today with out it! Alright... here are my stories:
(By sayiansirius.)
Chapter eighteen is validated!!! I know that my author's note says I've lost inspiration... but, don't worry, I lied! All I lost was my mind... lol. Okay, not so much. In honesty, I have noticed that my writing style has changed dramatically (not to mention the plot from chapter one to eighteen) and I am going through chapter by chapter to revise with more detail. I hope everyone enjoys the edited version as much as the version-I-don't-like-anymore.
Here is the quick family tree I promised to eliminated further confusion and remember I'm more than willing to answer any questions you might have!
Harry=Ginny - James, 17- Natalie, 16 - Melanie, 14 - Phoebe, 14 - Irene, 11 - Kaitlyn, 9
Ron=Hermione - Janine, 17 - Marley, 17 - Aaron, 13 - Lana, 11 - Cole, 8
George=Grace - Jason, 14 - BriLynn, 12
Fred=Hope - Allen, 15 - Bridgett, 12 - Dillon, 8
Percy=Penelope - Paige, 15
Charlie=Elizabeth - Bryan, 18 - Alexandra, 16 - Andrew, 14 - Justin, 10 - Ellana, 7
Bill=Fleur - Clayton, 18 - Daniel, 15 - Elliot, 9 - Gabilena, 7
Remus=Tonks - Darus, 15 - Kaylee, 11
Neville=Susan - Aimee, 16 - Frank, 13 - Alison, 10
Sorry if that is really confusing. I know there is a lot of them. But they're Weasleys!
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(By Marauder by Midnight)
Chapter Six: Weasley Entertainment The last chapter was filled with mischievious scheming. So, what happens when you put seven Weasley cousins together with one big plan? Here is the song, as promised, it will take a while to load but if you have the tim eI recommend listening to it, it's quite cute. Oh, and I'm sorry I couldn't get all fancy and hyperlink it, but I just don't know how to do that on the bio page. Oh well, you can just copy and paste this into the address bar. http://lds.org/churchmusic/detailmusicPlayer/index.html?searchlanguage=1&searchcollection=2&searchseqstart=284&searchsubseqstart=b&searchseqend=284&searchsubseqend
Alright... This story needs a big revision too... AND inspiration. It seems as if everybody enjoyed the story more when the characters were children, but that was actually never part of my idea... their Hogwarts years were. After all, these seven characters need to live up to the title of their story! Well, I need some feedback on this story, because I have no idea what readers want.
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(By Scarlet)
This is my first attempt at a oneshot. And, sadly, I added one blasted sentence into the edited version and it now seems like it will be a two-shot! Cah! What have I done!?! It actually ties in with The Lost Prophecy , if anyone's ever noticed.
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New Story is in queue... hopefully it will be validated soon! I hope you all enjoy it as it's my first Lily/James fanfic titled Obviously Right. Anyways, more information on that later...
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I also have another story but it's not under my name. Related byLexi_Leyra is a joint fic that me and my sister have started.
(Beautiful banner by Scarlet)
Next Chapter: In progress, but a very SLOW progress. It is, afterall, quite difficult to find the time when both of us can work on it together.
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Alright, thankyou everyone for bearing with me. I will try to keep updates as consistant as possible. But, with my schedule that can become rather difficult rather fast!
To tell you the truth-your awesome with description...and action scenes! Your an amazing author, I can't believe I've never read this story before. 10/10 - again.
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! :D!
Oh! I was hoping he wasn't actually dead. You should make him come back to life *sniff* Okay, so the dead can't come back...unless... They have the dragon stone! It was so sad to read about Mrs. Weasley sobbing and all but you've done an excellant joob on writing it all. Amazing Amazing AMAZING! 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!! =D! YOur so kind! :) This chapter was pretty easy to write though, because I pretty much knew exactly all the emotion points of writing this type of thing, but I\'m writing chapter 15, and therhe is a lot of emotional type things in that chapter that I\'m trying to bring out, but it\'s hard to do..
I Love love love LOVE your story. Sorry, you are probably getting tired of repititions! But you're so so so so SO good! Most people couldn't manage to bring all of the elements of your story into one. Now I'm realy anxious to find out waht happens. Why Draco is there? What Harry's choice is going to be...? Keep writing! Never stop! You are AMAZING! 10/10
Author's Response: ;o :D! Well, I don\'t care if their repetitive, they\'re great reviews and well, I love reviews! =D!
How Terrifying! Was Malfoy in the room too? Ugh! Harry should have just sent in Malfoy to get the stone. Besides...nobody likes Malfoy anyways! Great Chapter. 10/10
Author's Response: Ahaha, yes, Malfoy is a snob, isn\'t he?
It's so action packed! I LOVE it! It's terrible to see Mrs. Weasley torn from saving her son and keeping the knife away from Fredrick Berfulema. Great job! I won't be able to read the rest tonight but I will start your chapter. Great job on everything. You are truly an Incredible writer! 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you so much ;D!
:O I missed a chapter :( You have an amazing story! Don't give up on it! I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens in chapter 17 and 18 an 19 and...
Author's Response: :o
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Ty! ;) You are awesome! :D!
*sniff* I had really hoped that Remus would live. I love the way you have described the procedures in the hospital. Oh and I loved the scene with Remus and James and Sirius. Your an amazing writer, I wish I could be as descriptive as you are... I look forward to chapter 17!
Author's Response: =D! Ty! But ur stories better O: And chapter 17 is in early stages, but it will be done by the end of the week! Thank you! :D!
Wow! I'm so happy. It was just a dream!!! Who was the note from? Do we find out in the next chapter? You writing is sooo good, I should just jump to the next chapter but I know how much I love reviews so... Amazing Job! 10/10
Author's Response: :) Thank you so much..Your reviews are so fun to read! :D!
They're dead!?! Oh my gosh...I wanted to cry! And Petunia was a witch? Oh -
*My brainless brother (cousin) told me they were Dementors
*...eliminate you and that little vision you had with a Death Eater (Dementor) will come true...
How terrible...Remus realy is going mad. Once again, Your writing is incredible and it still ceases to amaze me at how you bring everything together in your story. I LOVE it! I'm looking forward to the rest of the story...oh and I'm almost half way through your 14th chapter (though I'm slightly confused meaning that I haven't read alll the other hcapters yet). Once again, I give you a 10/10. No, wait...20/10!!!
Author's Response: ;o
YAY!
20/10
=DDDDDDDDDDDD Well, if you cried now, *cough*, I shall not say more :)
Isn't Ryan brilliant? Another great chapter! I'm so terribly sorry that I haven't reviewed for 13 and 14 yet, I've been really busy since school started and it won't slow down until the end of October, but in the meantime I will try to get on on Wednesdays and sometimes Mondays, Fridays and Saturdays.
Anyways, I CAN't BELIVE HE'S GONE!!! You're a murder!!! (But a very good murder). Great Job 10/10
Author's Response: Lol
I\'m brilliant? :O
Ty! =D! ANd its ok about the review :P Did you get your chapter 13???? ALso, i\'m writing 16 right now..so yea :) And also, he needed to die o_o
I'm so so so sorry! I hope you will forgive me? I should have reviewed a long time ago! I love this chapter. Snape is dumb! Nobody likes Snape! Ok...so maybe Laila likes/liked Snape. I love you're whole style of writting, You are amazing!
~Lexi
Author's Response: ;O
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TY! ;]
LOL Very unique and hilarious! This is one of the best hmour stories I have read in a 'very' long time! 15/10
LOL Very unique and hilarious! This is one of the best hmour stories I have read in a 'very' long time! 15/10
This is a very cute, short story. you should consider posting the sequel on this site, i know that at least i would enjoy that. I have always loved the next generation stories. I loved the storey, keep up the awsome work.
Author's Response: Yeah I'm acctually considering posting it on this site. I'm gonna have to revise major time tho, lol. My grammar in it is absloutley horrible considering that it was like my 2nd chaptered fic. I'm so glad you like it =) Thanks for the review.
I really like the storey. submit another chapter soon.
Wow! I've always seen this story but I never readit...until today. Your writting seemed so realistic. I think you have described everything so perfectly especially the damage the war had brought. And on top of that, you're writting drew me in from the beginning and I could perfectly imagine all of the people you've described in this chapter (though I don't know them all). I am now very much looking forward to the rest of the story, meaning that your first chapter is so descriptive. Excellent story you are an AWESOME writter. 10/10
I really like your story. I love how you let Harry be in on it - very unique. I'm kid of confused on Hermione's crying - I'm not sure if they were happy tears or sad tears? Anyways, great fic. Ilook forward to reading more stories from you.
Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!! :D!!!!!!!!!!!!! Those were happy tears. She was happy that Harry got to see his parents..yeah! :D!!!! And I have a chaptered fic in process! 9 chapters are up! Chapter 10 is in queue, and 11 will be up shortly after! Thanks for your review!!!
You should write a follow up chapter. Your whole story line has sooo much potential. Maybe even a 'Post-Hogwarts' story?
Yes, I am kind, and do try to see the beauty in everyone, but I am a little wrapped up in myself. I have too many thoughts.
WARNINGS: Angsty, upsetting, some mild language and fighting later on. Not an average teen James/Lily fic.
Great first chapter! I love the point of view you write from! And the way Lily's life isn't perfect...far from, actually, makes the story so much more realistic! Oh, and I wish almost as much as Lilyi that Jasmine was still there *sniff* Poor Lily. Hopefully she'll have someone to confide in soon! 10/10
Aw...poor lily! I hope Black doesn't always hate her... that would be horrible! Oh and you should keeo trying to post chapter three. And if you need a beta I'd be happy to do it. You could email me at LexiGirl91@hotmail.com or pm me on the forums (under the same penname) but don't give up on it just becaus the mods wouldn't except it. It took forever before I finally got my third chapter validated. Just don't give up! 10/10 for your story!