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04/08/06

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The Poetry of Severus Snape by Zetera

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A poem which contains revelations of a painful past and present. Short and sweet.

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 04/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Poetry of Severus Snape

I liked it. makes you feel sorry for snape.

Author's Response: Aw thanks - it was written before HBP so I don\'t feel as well disposed towards Snape anymore!

Beautiful Disaster by ice witch

Rated: •
Summary: Hermione watches over Draco as he sleeps. His is a tortured soul and although she desperately wants to save him from his pain, she knows that only he can free himself. Based on the song "Beautiful Disaster" by Kelly Clarkson.

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 05/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Disaster

This is so sad, but you did a great job. The song fit perfectly with the story. Even though it's not from Draco's point of view I still get a good idea of what he's going through. It shows a side to Draco that we don't really see in the books. Also, I never thought that Draco and Hermione would get together, but you made it sound so believable. Great work!

Fifteen Minutes by HermioneDancr

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: People live and people die. Those who remain remember those who have gone before. Hermione has never told anyone at school about the summer before her third year, but she has not forgotten. One July afternoon during the summer after her fifth year, Hermione finds herself overcome by memories of the loss she never spoke about. Once again she relives the fifteen minutes she couldn't escape. One-shot.

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 04/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Fifteen Minutes

Sad, but i loved it. I didn't want it to end!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it. :-)

Dementor's Kiss by Mex

Rated: •
Summary: A poem about how you feel after a dementor kisses you.

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 04/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Dementor's Kiss

Good descriptions. I really enjoyed it.

Ginny Weasley's Diary by Scheherazade

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: What has a day in Ginny's life been like since her Fifth year? She sits down one stormy night to reflect on the trying emotions of the past year: from Dumbledore, to Bill's upcoming wedding... and of course, to Harry and the second war with Voldemort.

For MNFF's monthly challenge [challenge Number Four ~ A one-shot using one of the following sentences: "...And the rain fell ceaslessly on."] from Scheherazade of Hufflepuff

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 09/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Day in the Life....

You did a great job capturing the mood of your story. The way Ginny was portrayed was very believable in this. Great work!

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 09/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Day in the Life....

You did a great job capturing the mood of your story. The way Ginny was portrayed was very believable in this. Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks for R&Ring! I was worried when I wrote it that I didn\'t do too good a job on Ginny\'s character, lol. :-) Thanks again.

Addicted by ice witch

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione is addicted to Draco. He is all she thinks about, all she lives for. She knows she must escape his control but is she in too deep? Based on the song Addicted by Kelly Clarkson.

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 08/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Addicted

Great job! This seems really believable. Usually, Hermione is seen as somebody whose aspirations are very important to her, but this is very realistic. She never gets too serious with anyone in the books, so it seems like she would react like this in this type of situation. Again, great work!

Failure Is Punished by Hermione_Rocks

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: “Severus, Draco,” a cold, high-pitched voice said. “Welcome, welcome…come in, no need to dawdle…”

This was my entry to the Mugglenet 'write the opening to book 7' competion.

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 04/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Failure Is Punished

This story was awesome!! Very suspensful!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

The Violin Teacher by stardust

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Wherever his reputation preceded him, he was unwelcome. So he kept inside and played his violin. And the music carried through his open window, and, unseen, he serenaded the city... Remus Lupin, as a Muggle, tutors one Hermione Granger, a brilliant young violinist with a promising career. (AU, slightly allegorical.)

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 01/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: Remus

I really like your style of writing. Your descriptions create beautiful images and characterization, and the use of 'he' and 'she' throughout the chapter make it seem even more beautiful and romantic. Just one nit-pick:

for his for his touch was sure and the notes resonant.

You accidentaly repeated 'for his'. But great job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) You have a sharp eye - I\'ll edit that out when I get the chance.

Learning About Light And Dark by Hermione_Rocks

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: I don't usually write poetry, but I decided to give it a shot. This poem is about mistakes and regret. It is from Severus Snape's point of view, but could be read from a few character's perspectives.

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 05/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Learning About Light And Dark

I liked it. You did a good job of showing what snape was going through.

Author's Response: Thank you! Your review is appreciated!

Living With What's Done by Hermione_Rocks

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Ever since HBP and the famous interview with Jo conducted by Emerson and Melissa, there have been thousands of ideas and fics about Severus Snape and Lily Evans having some sort of romance. But Lily wasn't the only female in Snape's life...nor is the only type of love the romantic kind.

This is the story of someone else who has a connection with Severus, and how they have been, and still are, affected by him: Selena Snape, his sister.

"But I did...and I'm living with it. Because that's what we do...live with what we've done, live with our mistakes, the life we've made for ourselves."

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 08/05/06 Title: Chapter 5: Fighting, Falling, Losing

Well done. I love how you use all the flashbacks; this one is one of my favorites so far. I loved the line when Mellissa said, "You miss who he was, not what he bacame." That just fits the story perfectly. I just have one suggestion, though. You said that McGonagall divvied up the group. This is just my opinion, but since you are referring to McGonagall, and she is usually strict and firm, and can't exactly see her as 'divving' (sp?) up a group. Maybe you should change that to divided. Sorry if that seems too nit-picky, but other than that, this is a great chapter!

Author's Response: I really liked that line that Melissa said too. I kind of see what you\'re saying about McGonagal, the word is a little more relaxed than she is. And don\'t worry about being nit-picky, I like suggestions. :)

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 09/30/06 Title: Chapter 8: Realizations

I like how yo've brought Curtis into the story. Also, your take on Melissa is a bit different than how you've shown her so far, but it was really belevable, and well written, so great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 09/30/06 Title: Chapter 9: Familiar Faces

Great flashback. I like it that how all this time she was worried that he would become a Death Eater, but she trusted him so much, that now she has a hard time believing that it has happened. Also, I didn't expect Narcissa to come into the story. I loved this chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 11/09/06 Title: Chapter 11: Long Ago Acceptance And Apologies

Wow, Snape admitted it all! It was unexpected, but still in character. Can't wait for the next chapter ( I really want to find out what happens to Selena!)

Author's Response: I knew I had to have some sort of moment when Severus and Selena came to trust each other...or, when they used to, at least. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 10/15/06 Title: Chapter 10: What to Believe

This is great! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 09/03/06 Title: Chapter 7: He's Never Really Gone

Great chapter, as always. I like how you showed a scene from their home rather than school, because it gives you a more in-depth look at what their life was like. I'm interested to see how the date with Mr. Blackwater goes.

Author's Response: Glad you liked seeing them at home; when I started this fic I wasn\'t sure if I wanted to show much involving their parents or home. Thanks!

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 06/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: News

My brother and I think that this is a very original story. We never thought about how Dumbledore's death would impact Snape's family. We loved this story and are looking forward to the next chapters. ;)

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it\'d be a interesting take on things. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 08/26/06 Title: Chapter 6: Accusations

I really enjoyed this chapter. This is kind of a turning point for Selena, in the flashback and now. She is realizing that she can't control him, and that he's not the person she believed or wanted him to be. You showed all of this very well. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 11/28/06 Title: Chapter 12: An Encounter

Again, not something I would have expected from this story, but still very nice. I'm looking forward to seeing how you end this.

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: HorcruxHunter14 Signed
Date: 06/29/06 Title: Chapter 4: The Royal Snapes

Great chapter. Loved the flashback!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for the nice review!

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