Well first of all, my name is Christine . I'm fifteen years old (fifty one, if you're dyslexic), and I live in Ontario. I am also in need of an author's page update.
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Chapter Three is in the Queue!
I have a brand new story that you should check out if its accepted... The Key to my Heart a Lily and Harry fic... I'm sure you'd all like it!
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NOOOO!!!! you can't read your hogwarts letter to a muggle!!
aww! I never really saw Luius that deep! (cough) Correction... I have! But you portrayed his deepness so well I thought that I didn't lol! I don't even follow what I'm saying here!
Voldemort seemed really choppy. He was too quick and not very Voldy-ish. You might (and might not) want to look into that to make it better.
Otherwise, I thought it was great.
Well, no actually - Lucius - I felt didn't grieve enough. If I had just lost the two people I loved most, I probably would have asked to be killed as well. Lucius may not be like that, but I feel that you should have made him be a little bit sadder than what he was. . . d'you catch my drift?
Again, I feel that you changed subjects within conversations unnaturally.
Also, I feel that Harry would have put up a bit more of a fight when Ginny asked to leave with them. Harry is really protective, and I don't think that he would change his mind that easily.
I don't mean to criticize, but I think your story was a bit too Fanfictiony if you know what I mean. Many stories that I have read have seemed very real to me, but this one sort of seemed like fake Crocs, or Presidents Choice Coke. Not the real thing, sort of like a cheapo re-make.
Your story has a great plotline by the way, and I think it will go far.
ok... weird... but I promise that my review won't be as long as my last one.
I was just totally taken aback, when Aunt P. was glaring at Harry one minute, and being all polite and showing him pictures the next. And Dudley? A Wizzard? That was so unexplainable that my mouth dropped. Excuse this but... were you high when you wrote that???? Because there are reasons why Dudley could NOT be a Wizard.
#1. He can't see Dementors.
#2. He's never made strange things happen before.
#3. He just. . . COULDN'T!
I mean... he's DUDLEY!
I think all of your characters are really OOC, and even if you will explain later, that unless the story is supposed to be non canon, there is not an excuse for characters being OOC.
I'm surprised the mods actually activated this.
If I were your Beta (no offense to your Beta or you), and I read your story, I think I would litterally rip my hair out in frustration.
Sincerely Balded By You,
James Jameson
P.S: I know you said that nothing would be taken into offense but I believe that I might discourage you in some way or another. I really do not mean any offense, and I'm truly sorry for being such a harsh critic.
I guess I lied. That was probably the longest review in all of MNFF History. (excusing one that took up half a page for "From Abomination to Adoration" by grape_2010) Once again, I'm sorry for critcizing so much. I didn't realize it was your first fic. I promise that when my story gets approved, that you can butcher my thoughts to your hearts content.
Author's Response: If you are so against characters acting OOC, go write to JKR and complain about OotP! I should also tell you that authors do not appreciate their stories being compared to fake Crocs.
~Ginny Potter101
P.S If you have any other comments, email me.
funny... i think "fewat" is going to actually become fond of the mini-hermy
Author's Response: We\'ll see....Thanks for your review.
this is gonna be funny!!!! *has said that before and is sorry for repetitive reviews* Ron's ears are probably turning black... bypassing red!
Author's Response: XD
LOL Probably!
aw! draco and hermione are growing fond of each other!
Author's Response: yes, they are. XD
i wish he would stop calling her mud ganger.. its annoying!
Author's Response: Yes, I agree. But it\'s for the progression of the story. He can\'t call her Mudblood. And Granger is...hmm...out of the question for him. Besides, he has to adjust to the idea. Watch. >>
By the end it\'ll be something totally different. XD
ooooh! They'd better stop quarrleing and become friends
Author's Response: Lol.
I'm gonna re-add this to my faves.. I'm glad that you added more chappies.
Author's Response: Oh yay! You faved it! XD
You totally just made my day. I\'m glad I added more chappies too, and didn\'t delete it after DH. >>
first things first... your AN reminded me of something I said to my friend! She's really shy, so I said something that ended in "you-little-voldemorts-soul-at-kings-cross-in-DH-you! " then I said, jk.. JK (rowling!) I guess we have the same sense of corny teacher-like humor!
Anywho.... I just finished reading (that part above was written right after I read the author's note... be proud.. you'rs are the only ones I ever bother to read). I really like this fic! good job!
Author's Response: Hahahaha, that\'s been one of my favourite corny jokes! I\'m glad you like this one... thisi s probably my least favourite one of my stories up on MNFF, but I like to write about Volders whenever possible.
good job!
Author's Response: :-)
WAAAA!!!! Omg im am crying so hard right nw you wouldn't believe.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! =] I\'m sorry about the tears. LOL.
soo funny!
Author's Response: Short and sweet...thank you so much! And it\'s always great to find new readers especially who have such HP like alliterated names!
sorta confuffling but funy
Author's Response: Glad to know the story was funny but I have mixed reactions at the fact that the story was \"confuffling\" too... ;)
ooh! thats interesting! *must read on*
~*~ Tine
Author's Response: And wait till you see what happens...
woot! great! i knew it wasn't a dream! I expect that it would make him see a different side of things. I wonder how Draco and Narcy took it? *NARCISSA* I'm sorry, I always think of calling her Cissy, but it always turns out as Narcy! :P
Author's Response: Narcy... that is a lovely name! I actually have plans for a story that will involve Draco\'s perspective on all of this, but it may not come for quite some time.