01/17/05
Due to the hacking experience, and the fact that spyware seems to come with each e-mail from MNFF, I will no longer be posting Prophecy's Child here on MNFF> I have moved over to SIYE. I have posted the first 10 chapters there, re-editing and adding content along the way. If you are interested in still following this story, it can be found at http://www.siye.co.uk/siye/viewstory.php?sid=11975
I'd like to thank all my loyal readers for following along with my story to this point. If you choose not to come to SIYE, I understand. Thank you for letting me attempt to entertain! Until we meet again...
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Harry Potter and the Pureblood Princess by softballrulz6
Rated: •Summary:
Please Review!
Harry's at the Dursley's when he recieves a normal letter from his wizard friend. On the way to the Burrow, he finds his hands are sweaty and is fidgeting every few seconds. Soon he realizes he likes someone he never really noticed. *Pre OOTP*
Date: 10/17/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Last Dance
Then end of that chapter seemed a bit rushed. You might want to try a little more emotion in the chapters as well. But your descriptions are fantastic and you are keeping with the characters. Keep up the good work. And please take no offense, I am only trying to help. With my own story, my writing got better in later chapters from the suggestions I was given.
Author's Response: Oh it did? Sorry about that! I'll work on it! Thank you! Anything helps! lol!
To Catch a Horcrux by CraftySlytherin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: True to their word, Ron and Hermione accompany Harry on his quest to destroy the Horcruxes of Lord Voldemort. In the tiny Irish village of Knockmarn Glen, they search for the golden cup of Helga Hufflepuff. Will they be able to get the Horcrux? What dangers lie in wait for them?
Date: 10/14/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot
Very nicely done! I love the fact that you had them working together as a team and Ron not being totally dim witted as a lot of fics make him out to be. Hugs~~Kat
Harry Potter and the End by Witch Wannabe
Rated: 6th-7th Years •Summary: Harry has to say goodbye to Hogwarts, Privet Drive and his former life. But in all bad situations, there is always a little hope and Ginny provides Harry with comfort. Ron and Hermione become a couple but are also there at Harry's side. Together, they face the hardest and most important battle of their lives. (Most romance happens in later chapters). I promise the story gets much better. I set the category at romance R/H and H/G because its general but has LOTS of shipping moments.
Date: 04/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Final Farewells
I have to agree with JasonBourne and Sexymink......I tried to enjoy it. But the chapter with Hermione was just way too OOC. Even after that, I kept reading, but the story is nothing but an orgy with teenagers playing house and both the girls getting pregnant. Even with HORMONES, as your explanations keep saying, Hermione would have some self control. This isn't a romance story, for you have no romance in it. It seems to be smut, and not very well written at that. You've just lost another reader, sorry to say.
A Seed From The Ground by Seren
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Auror-in-training Kingsley Shacklebolt is learning to blend in with the crowd in downtown London. There, he meets a small, lost girl, and learns how much impact a simple act of kindness can really have.
Date: 10/13/05 Title: Chapter 1: A Seed From the Ground
Wonderful story and such a beautiful sentiment. Fantastic work Seren!~~Kat
Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power by mrsgeorgeweasley
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: After the trauma of his sixth year Harry and his friends enter into their last year of magical education at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The trio try to balance passing their exams with fighting Voldemort and planning their futures. Despite all that, romance will fill the air with wedding bells ringing out. This year Harry is in more danger than ever when his enemy finds new ways to try and get the Boy Who Lived. Voldemort’s presence will be felt more than ever as he steals more lives; can Harry find himself before its too late? And what adventures will he have along the way?
If you haven’t read Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived then I would strongly urge you to do so because if you don’t then this story probably won’t make any sense to you. Be helpful to writers by Reading and Reviewing!
The very last chapter of this fic has been reworked. Please re-read there's more about the kids in there! Also my author's notes on the final chapter have also been added. Ten part fic related to this going up shortly!!
Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 37: When We Grew Up
You're a brilliant writer that has kept me entertained for quite a while wiht your stories. I have printed them out and taken them to read, as I cannot sit at my desk for long. Please continue on with your writing, I do so enjoy it.~~Kat
Harry Potter and the Mind's Eye by GhostCoon
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Harry begins to put his plans for defeating Voldemort into action, but runs into unexpected trouble that will make his task considerably more difficult. Harry will have to change his plans completely and rely on his friends more than ever as he battles Death Eaters and destroys Horcruxes, often inches from death itself. Seventh Year, post-HBP. H/G and some R/H. A lot of action, a little romance, a great read!
Date: 07/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Leaving for Good
First of all, congratualtions on your wedding. I hope you life together is wonderfully happy and prosperous.
Onto the review....I have spent most of this afternoon doing nothing but reading your story. It was captivating and so wonderfully written. I had planned a sort of Mind's Eye scene for my own story, but I am heading back to the drawing board, as I don't think I will even be able to compare. It is my sincerest hope that you do continue writing.
Not many people think of the adjustments that have to be made when sight, hearing, or a loss of motor function happens. It seems to change the way that the world is looked at. I know this from experience, at least the motor function part. It was encouraging to see that someone could express the anger, fear, and sorrow that a person has to go through before acceptance and adjustment can be found.
I have babbled on long enough, I hope I covered everything. LOL. Please continue in your writing, you have a wonderful talent! ~~Kat
Author's Response: Wow, thanks very much! I\'m really glad you enjoyed everything, and I hope you\'ll check out the sequel. Good luck on your story too!
Harry Potter and the Battle to the End by lisa_lovegood
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary:
Join Harry as he goes on the search for the remaining Horcruxes. What surprises will he come across along the way? Will he find all of them in time? Will he bring an end to the Dark Lord? Will he escape with even his life?
Go check out a spin-off to this story - "How Long?"
Date: 08/01/06 Title: Chapter 7: Returning Home
No fair causing tears like that. I adored the description of the nursery. The graveyard scene was priceless. The comment about family at the end was my very favorite part. Harry needed that type of connection and realisation. Wonderful work, hon!~~Kat
Author's Response: Thank you! *wipes tear* I\'m sorry, I didnt mean to make people cry *hangs head in shame* lol! Lisa xxx
Date: 07/21/06 Title: Chapter 4: A day in Diagon Ally
I'm a terrible fan, I have to admit. As I print most of these stories to read while I am laid up on the couch or in bed, I don't often leave reviews. (Bad Kat, no biscuit) I do have a favorite line. Pain was when you loose something that you thought would be there forever. Pain is when you are so sick and tired of having to fight all the time, you just want to give up, even when you know you can’t. Pain was also when you are forced to give up the things you love. This is the most down to earth, REAL line I have seen in a while. I may be contacting you soon to get permission to use it in my story, if that is okay? Great work hon! ~~Kat
Author's Response: *blushes weasley red* wow! That was the best review I\'ve had in ages! The sort of ones that make you realise that your not wasting your time, you know? Anyway, sure, you can use that line, though i would appieciate it if you disclaim, have to keep my mark on things! LOL. I really don\'t know where that line really came from, as I don\'t most of my ideas. they just come while I write. thanks again for the great review! It\'s really strange that you should read my story now, as I have recently started re-reading you story. As in, yesterday i started re-reading your story. Thing is, I cant remember leaving a review....ahwell. lol. Lisa xxx
Author's Response: just had a brain wave. I added you to my fave stories! so you will be able to see that i have a story. correct? Lisa xxx
Harry Potter, The Boy Who Lived by Khrys
Rated: Professors •Summary: With the help of an ancient spell, his friends, and love, Harry embarks on his mission to destroy Voldemort. What will happen on the way? With Ginny, Ron, and Hermione by his side, will Harry find the solution? And where do Neville and Luna fit in all this?
And, as of August 25, 2006, I'm done. I sure hope you liked it!
Date: 07/22/06 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty One: Storm the Fortress
Percy's still an idiot, or was one up to the end. Great chapter! It's hard to keep a battle scene moving and not lose people with all that is going on. So sad about Fleur, can't say I feel the same about The Git though. Keep up the fantastic work.
Author's Response: I agree about Percy. Although, in the end, he really was trying to repair some of the damage he had done. And, had he survived, and not killed Bill\'s wife, he might have garnered some forgiveness. Maybe...
Thank you for the compliments on the battle. I wasn\'t joking when I said I had to draw a map with arrows and numbers and notes. I never could have written the scene without it. If anyone wants to see my poorly drawn rendition of the battle for clarification. I have it.
I feel bad for Fleur, she was trying to save Molly and failed miserably, losing her own life in the process. Damn Percy and his bad aim. Thank you again!
Date: 08/17/06 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty Three: The End is in Sight
Wonderful way to twist the spell, goes along perfectly with the way of twisting the horcruxes to destroy them. Looking forward to the last chapter and will be watching for the sequel!
Author's Response: Aww. Thank you! I am so glad to know that someone else got my twisted humor! The last chapter is in the queue and should be posted soon. I am still contemplating the sequel. I have some good ideas, but I want to see the reaction to the ending before I start writing.
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty Two: Last Ditch Effort
Great chapter. But you lost me there at the end. Or am I supposed to be lost? Now I'm more confused than ever (which is saying a LOT). LOL
Author's Response: Ahhh. The ending is a bit of a cliff hanger into the last two chapters. Hopefully, when the next chapter is approved, it will be much more clear! I am sorry to confuse everyone so much, it isn\'t my intention!
One Good Day by Grimmrook
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: On Harry's seventeenth birthday, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny decided to grant him a very big wish. Rated 3-5 for a scene in the last chapter. --
This is the second story of the Epilogues story arc, and should be read after reading Right Here, but before starting in on the Epilogues series itself.
Date: 05/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Just Harry
Most excellent! And in the story, you brought up a very good point, very close to a moral of the story. No maatter what the hardships and trials, we all deserve one good day.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It\'s very funny, but you\'re the first person to mention that, and that theme is actually VERY important. Not only is it important to the very heart of this story, but it\'s absolutely vital to the sequel too. Though, I think you\'ll find I take everything in a very different direction, it\'s that sentiment that Ginny expresses to Harry that comes back to play a major role in shaping his life right after the death of Voldemort.
Thank you so much for the review, I hope you\'ll keep your eyes open for Epilogues Part I:Shadows, which is the sequel I speak of. I also hope you wouldn\'t mind giving a read and review to Right Here, which is actually the prequel to this story.
Thanks again, I really appreciate it
The Seventh Horcrux by Melindaleo
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: The hunt for the Horcruxes begins. Harry has to decide who to trust as he moves closer to fulfilling his destiny. Will he be able to find and destroy all the Horcruxes? And at what price? Will he be able to find the strength within himself – the Power the Dark Lord Knows Not – in order to succeed in vanquishing Voldemort? And…can he do it and still get the girl? Join Harry and his faithful friends on their quest to finally defeat a Dark Lord.
Date: 07/30/06 Title: Chapter 20: Christmas with the Malfoys
Wonderful chapter. The dinner was priceless, and everyone singing together brought the feeling of togetherness just where it should be. Christmas in July is the way to go. The reminder that there are worse things than no presents was fantastic. That's something that seems to be forgotten a lot around that time of year, sadly. Keep up the great work!~~Kat
Date: 08/03/06 Title: Chapter 21: Tightening of the Noose
Another great chapter. I loved the tension with Ron and the way the girls stood up for Harry. I also really liked the way Harry let it go when push came to shove. Excellent, fantastic, terrific chapter. Your writing just seems to get better and better!
With Tired Eyes, Minds, and Souls We Slept by QuIDdITch_PlaYA
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Sequel to Revenge of the Serpent. The title is taken from a One Tree Hill episode title.
Harry and Ginny are happily married and living together. They are about to become parents. Still, life has never been normal for Harry Potter, and it may never be.
Edit: Final author's note was edited.
Date: 05/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Morning News
Very nicely done. As for names....I like Brogan (means strength) for a boy, and Tessa (means countess / royalty) for a girl. Anyway, keep up the great work! will be watching for more.
Author's Response: hmm i like tessa.. its cute! i might use it... you\'ll see <333
Date: 05/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Morning News
Forgot to add a request. Please do not go with rhyming names. My sister's name and mine rhyme. After a while it gets hard to tell who people are talking to, and we are never called by the corect names the first time around.
Author's Response: haha thats kinda funny:] i\'ll remember that
Date: 05/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Morning News
Forgot to add a request. Please do not go with rhyming names. My sister's name and mine rhyme. After a while it gets hard to tell who people are talking to, and we are never called by the corect names the first time around.
Author's Response: oops double post :P
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 4: Enough for the Titanic
Please, no rhyming names. That's my only request. People just do not understand the consequences of naming a child before they bestow the names themselves. Rhyming names cause for confusion as to who is being called, who is in trouble, and there are going to be at least 3 family members that never get it straight. I say this from experience.
Author's Response: lol thanks for the advice.
The First Letter by GWeaz
Rated: 3rd-5th Years •Summary: Everyone knows that Lily hated James. That is, until a special bottle worked its magic on them. When Lily is distraught from the death of her parents she can't imagine life without them. She finds a letter in a bottle that gives her strength to go on. Who was this boy that wrote to her? Could there possibly be someone out there that loved her so deeply?
This is the prequel to my other story, Message in a Bottle. It isn't essential that you read that one first, but it might be helpful.
Date: 07/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: King's Cross, 1971
I want to start by saying I absolutely adored Message in a Bottle! And this one is making me laugh so much, it is right up there with that one. I can't promise reviews often, because of medical issues, I am not often able to sit at the computer for very long. Please keep up the wonderful work. I am looking forward to many more laughs to come! ~~Kat
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to give me a review. I am ecstatic that my story is making you laugh, I like to think that it\'s funny, but that\'s just me. Anyway, thanks again!!!!
A Legend Continued by Meryl Montgomery
Rated: 1st-2nd Years •Summary: A story about Harry Potter's children growing up and becoming legends in their own right. Full of heated arguements, glowering girlfriends, and a rival too good-looking to be considered fair.
Chapter Eight Now Up!
Chapter Eight Excerpt:
'"This morning," McGonagall began, her face white. "I was greeted by two hysterical young girls from Ravenclaw. They informed me that they, along with their best friend Melanie Trumpett, were approached by a cloaked figure who appeared to have came from the Forbidden Forest. These two girls tried to persuade their friend to come along with them, as they were cautious of the stranger, but they said that Ms. Trumpett was answering oddly. She didn't look the same, and her eyes looked "funny"...'
Date: 07/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I like your take on this. I did, however, find one error. The Weasleys have 7 children... 6 boys, and Ginny. So, Arthur Weasley would have been pacing for the Eighth time, not the seventh.
Author's Response: Yes, but the twins would have counted as one pregnancy, meaning for his own children, Arthur would have visited the hospital only six times.