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Lily of the US [Contact]
12/14/06

http://www.freewebs.com/bombatheredqueen


My name is Megan. I'm 13 years old and I wish
I was somewhere exciting. I had pretty pictures on here but I had to take them off. =[ *sigh*

My favourite things: Wicked, Rent, Cats, A Chorus Line, HP, Bend it like Beckham, POTC, pretty much any book but especially fantasy, and WICKED!!!!!

My least favourite things: hmmm... vegatables.

Wicked, Rent, Avenue Q, A Chorus Line, Cats, Seussical, Mary Poppins, Godspell- Give me Broadway musicals, I love them all!



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Reviews by Lily of the US


A Daddy's Poem by Luna_Lovegood831

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The daughter of Harry and Ginny goes to Daddy's Day at her little wizarding school. Her dad is not around to be there with her physically, but she knows he's in her heart. Based on a poem called A Dad's Poem written anonymously.
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 05/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Oh, wow, that was beautiful. Have you written any more about Mallory? I think she would make a good OC. *scolds plot bunnies for stealing other people's characters* Anyways, that was great; I'm almost in tears. ~megan~



Delightful Pain by Queen of Serpents

Rated: Professors •
Summary:
Hermione gets a visitor at night that delights in her pain. Before she used to dread the nights but lately... she has begun to look forward to meet her nocturnal vistor... and rapist?

Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.

Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.

~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

Wow. It was, erm... interesting. I mean, great, really great, well-written and everything- but to me, Hermione seemed really OOC. Of course, I would be really OOC too if I was getting raped every night, so...I guess it was supposed to be like that.

Sitting here, reading this, I wondered why I was reading something so different. And then I realised that WAS the reason. This is really amazing, most people I know wouldn't even think about writing a story this intense. Thumbs up for being original! ~megan~



Daddy by blondebouncingferret

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Post Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/03/07 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

Awesome fic! I usually hate those "ron gets hermione pregnant before they're married" fics but this one was really good! I'm putting it on my faves!



Shirty by musiclily88

Rated:
Summary: Hermione and Ron finally reach the point that everyone knew was coming. Begins in a shop and culminates in a birthday party. (Just a semi-fluffy one-shot where frustration breaks apart the awkwardness that surrounds Ron and Hermione. Rated pg-13 just in case.)
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

very cute! i love ron/hermione fics



Dementor's Kiss by Mex

Rated:
Summary: A poem about how you feel after a dementor kisses you.
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Dementor's Kiss

Intresting. Sad, haunting, beautiful- maybe a little disturbing, but good job.



The Salem Witch Trials by FullofLife

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry, Ron and Hermione are spending a day in the small wizarding village of Hogsmeade when they happen to come upon a strange amulet lying in the snow. This amulet has amazing powers and transports the three friends to Salem, Massachusetts in the year 1692 when Muggles lived in fear of witches and wizards and the penalty for being able to perform magic was death.
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue- February 1st, 1998

ok. first of all i have several points to make, which i am going to make here b/c i am too lazy to review what happens in every chapter after the chapter it happens in.

Number 1- no, Hermione does not die. I refuse. she is my favorite character and she can't die.

Number 2- very confusing. if Rebecca was supposed to be hanged, then hermione showed up, but rebecca was supposed to be already in Salem, then why wouldnt Rebecca, hermione and emily get hanged instead of just hermione and emily?

Number 3- i liked that you added DUMBledore to the story. but why would he send the trio to Salem if he knew hermione was going to die?

ok, well, even if hermione did die (which is, by the way, impossible) i think it is a really good story. keep writing1



For Padma's Sake by HermioneDancr

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Once, Parvati and Padma shared everything: pain and tears, happiness and laughter. But time has changed them, and now -- as Parvati sits with her sister at the dining table -- she cannot share. She must be strong. For Padma's sake. HBP Spoilers.
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: For Padma's Sake

this is such a beautiful piece of writing. i have never struggled with anorexia, but I came very close last year. I love this fic beacuse i can relate to it. great job.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it!



Whether We Wear Masks by Seren

Rated:
Summary: 'There is no black and white, Blaise.' Hermione teaches Blaise that she knows about hatred and discrimination. Warning for historical references to racism.
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Whether We Wear Masks

This was a wonderful story. I can really relate to how Blaise felt when he saw the pictures that Hermione showed him. I went to a Holocaust museum while I was in France this summer and I saw and learned things I would rather not have seen. But it opened my eyes and made me realize that there is more to life than what I see. It also made me sick and I completely understand why Blaise felt the same way.
The story was beautifully written and your word choice was very powerful. I think you are an amazing writer and this story is going on my favorites.



Dog Years by Jazz

Rated: Professors •
Summary: The Marauders are facing the end of their last Hogwarts year, and secrets are on the verge of coming out. But all in good time. Two of the boys are trying to figure things out. Will they prevail?
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! that is really sweet... I don't usually read same-sex pairing stories, but this one is really well-written and I like it a lot. great job! ~megan~

Author's Response: Hello! I would like to thank you personally for reading \"Dog Years\" here on Mugglenet and leaving me a lovely review!\r\n\r\nUnfortunately, I also come bearing bad news. I will no longer be updating the story on here, as the mods are, in my opinion, a tad too picky about canon and I really don\'t have the patience to change my story to suit their needs. I love it just the way it is, even if some references are ahead of the time frame, and if I use way too many fragments and don\'t decipher descriptions as much as they seem to want me to.\r\n\r\nIf you are indeed still interested in reading this story (and perhaps some of my other fanfiction works), you can find me at http://www.fanfiction.net/~thejazz and \"Dog Years\" is under the title \"Here\'s To The Future\". I\'ve enabled anonymous reviews, so if you are currently not a member do not feel as though you have to sign up to leave me a review!\r\n\r\nAgain, thank you SO MUCH for reviewing \"Dog Years\", and I hope you keep reading!\r\n\r\nxo Jazz



Somewhere by wendelin the wierd

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Somewhere a woman stands waiting, her husband still has to return to her.

And she waits...






It was always in the heart that the mind was powerless.
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Ohhh... that is so sad! Beautiful word choice "In real life there are no erasers." Great story, even though it just made me depressed, ack! ~megan~



Now Dance! by TOMROHT

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione convinces Harry and Ron to go with her to the auditions for Professor Lockhart's new Drama Club. This is Harry's first foray into show biz, and he's not at all impressed.
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 12/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

funneee! I don't laugh out loud while reading fanfics but i did on this one! great story!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked it...laughing is good...I laughed a lot writing it...thanks so much for the review! TOMROHT



The Ultimate Trust by Celestial Melody

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "Hazel bored into emerald, igniting the magic fire of love that cannot be explained but is felt only once in a lifetime."
Witness the marriage of two of the most beloved (though little-known) characters in the world of magic.
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Roses

I have chills. I'm not even joking. I loved your descriptions of the flowers at the beginning- they gave me goosebumps! Great job, Julia! ~megan~

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much, Megan! *hugs*

I can\'t tell you how much your reviews mean to me. I really need the encouragement right now and I\'m so glad you liked the story.

Thanks again, dear. =)

~Julia~



The Things I Do For L.O.V.E by Pussycat123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hi, I’m Lily Evans. You know, there are a lot of fics about me out there. I’m flattered that you spend time thinking about me, but sometimes sickened. How could these fics not mention my bonkers beautiful cat, Missy? And what about my evil and malicious extremely helpful conscience? Or the fact that I make a fool out of myself at every opportunity am unique?

Well, this fic has all of these things. It also has L.O.V.E (I’m the ‘L’), the elite group of cliquey lovely girls that I am part of. And our rival, the sarcastic cynic also unique Iola Potter (cousin and partner in crime to James). But does it have an actual plot? Of course not Absolutely! And it starts with me getting a detention with Iola (through no fault of my own, of course). And we kind of ... almost ... well, we get on alright. A friendship sparks, shall we say. I have no idea how it happens It is meant to be. But it’s going to take some fighting for if we want to keep it. It would be a lot easier to just stick to what we know, really. We were perfectly happy hating each other. But ... well. I guess you’ll have to find out!

Read this or I’ll curse you Read this and I’ll love you!
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: More About Me (And A Little About Iola)

i like the different portrayal of Lily! great story so far!

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m very glad to hear it! different portrayal of Lily was what I was going for, so thanks!



Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/04/07 Title: Chapter 5: Quidditch, And All The Mayhem It Entails

evil cat! tehee i love it!!!!!!! it made me laugh so hard!!!!! great fic

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m so glad! It makes me so happy when people like my stuff!

Author's Response: By the way, if my calculations are correct, this is the 100th review! Hooray for you, this means you get some cyber cookies! Hurrah!



Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: L.O.V.E And Iola Are Very Different Things

lol. i love the butter thing. one time my friend and i were trying to warm up cookies in the microwave and we accidently burned them. we realized that we set the microwave on "bake!"
pleeeeease update. PS this is going on my faves

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked the butter thing. And, it seems I\'m not the only one disastorous when it comes to microwaves, so that\'s a comforting thought! I will update soon, but I\'m alternating between this and my other Marauder Era fic, so I can\'t always update as quickly as I\'d like. Also, if I update to fast, it will all be over, and I\'ll be lost in the world! I\'m honoured to be on your faves. I always am.



Serpent in the Moonlight by Celestial Melody

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Nineteen years after Voldemort’s defeat, a young girl named Riana is living an innocuous life with her adoptive Muggle parents until she receives her acceptance letter from Hogwarts.

Escaping the clutches of her loving but stifling parents, Riana travels to London and from there to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. There, Riana is viewed as mysterious, cunning, sly, and—though her parentage is unknown—is chosen for Slytherin House.

The two halves of her life clash, as her anorexia battles with the disdain of fellow Slytherin students for Muggle-born witches and wizards. Follow Riana on her journey through the world of wizardry and her search to find a true home, the identity of her real parents, as well as her inner conflict with anorexia.

Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/01/07 Title: Chapter 18: Fight Between Friends

Ok- first off, this is an amazing story! It is well-written, there are few or no grammatical or spelling errors, and the characters are very real. I love it!
I feel horrible for Riana. I have never suffered from anorexia, but I was close to it last year and I know exactly how it feels.
"the idea of a werecat came from Eragon by Christopher Paulini" that is exactly what I thought of when Fabian first came into the story. I love his character, by the way.
Well, you have and awesome story going. Keep up the good work and don't stop writing.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks, Lily, =)

I\'m thrilled that you\'re enjoying the story. It was begun at a time when I was getting over my own bout with anorexia and bulimia; thus, it has special significance to me and I really like it when readers can tap into that feeling. *hugs* I\'m glad you never had to fall completely down that rabbit hole, though. But I love you for understanding. =)

Eh, what can I say? Fabian is just ... amazing. *giggles* He\'s quite the little devil, though, isn\'t he? And Paolini\'s character was indeed my inspiration; he was adorable ... in a creepy, bratty kind of way. Hee!

Thanks very much, again, for your compliments and I\'ll try to post again soon. But inspiration comes so seldom, sadly... =( Just made myself depressed. *sigh* Anyway, I\'ll do my best to update soon.

~Julia~



Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 09/05/07 Title: Chapter 19: Unrest

*gasp* *squee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* *die*

Julia, that was beautiful! You've done it again! I'm in shock, even though I shouldn't be- you'd think I'd be used to the talent by now. But it was just- gah, too wonderful for words!

Your descriptions were, as usual, fabulous! I want to go to Dean's Ice Cream Parlor now. I could picture it, and I just... *is once again lost for words* And the "chicken fat-" I was so surprised! I thought it was going to be butterscotch or something. (Though I did have a sneaking thought that the "golden yellow" might turn out to be... never mind.) And by the way, what flavour was Fabian's? Or are we supposed to use our imaginations?

Julia, I love it! I'm so glad you updated. My only, impatient request is...

more? ~megan~

Author's Response: *giggles* *huggles Megan* Thank you. =) I\'m so glad you liked it.

As for Dean\'s Ice Cream Parlor, I do too! I wouldn\'t want to eat their ice cream, though, unless I knew what it had in it. =/ Or what flavor I was getting! (And, hey! I want to know what you thought the \"golden yellow\" ice cream was going to be. *grins mischievously* Anything\'s better than \"chicken fat.\") As for Fabian\'s flavor, you\'re just supposed to use your imagination. However, I\'ll be nice and tell you that it was a wonderful blend of strawberries and ripe, red plums. *grins* So, Riana did eat some ice cream. But not much.

*salutes request* As soon as my other new story gets through the queue, I will be posting the newest chapter of \"Serpent.\"

~Julia



The Insufferable Zipper by Aelan Greenleaf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "What's my problem, Ginny, what's my problem? My problem is that you've oh-so-calmly suggested that my best friend has had the dubious pleasure of seeing you starkers!" - A wardrobe malfunction creates problems for one Harry Potter. [H/G, R/H]
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Insufferable Zipper

I love it! My sister is convinced I'm insane because I was laughing so much!



The Dark Lord's Blog by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: What does Lord Voldemort do in his spare time? Well, that's an excellent question. Who would have known that the Dark Lord has a blog? (He also has a loyal following of readers, most of whom are Death Eaters and who post their comments.) Voldemort dispenses advice on everything from murder methods to germ protection to Power Rangers to shoes, and gives an account of the life of an evil overlord. But is he posting too much personal information online? And will Harry read it and find out more about the Dark Lord than Voldemort ever intended? Read and see.


WARNING: Extremely OOC behaviour from almost all.


RUNNER-UP in the 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Humour fic! Also nominated like 21 times, because apparently my readers are as insane as I am!


Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 01/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Don't Try This At Home

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! I was laughing out loud and reading my sister the part about the poptarts and she thought I was completely crazy! ~megan~

Author's Response: Yay, thanks! I hope you take Voldemort\'s advice to heart (wow, I thought I\'d never say that...) and DON\'T try blowing up toasters at home. I\'ve actually tried it... and gotten in trouble for it...



Defying Gravity by grangergurl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Severus Snape has longed to be accepted. Could this be his chance? First one-shot songfic in my newest series, Wicked.
Reviewer: Lily of the US Signed
Date: 06/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Defying Gravity

Ack! Hailey, I was going to do a Wicked fic! You beat me to it! Ah, well, I suppose I won't be mad at you, since it's good.

Well, I have to say, if I had to choose one character from Harry Potter to use in a songfic of "Defying Gravity," it would be anyone but Severus Snape. You really pulled it off nicely. It's interesting how, in Wicked, the whole point of the show is that Elphaba isn't evil, but you used the song in a different way, as the reason Snape became evil.

I do have a teeny bit of concrit- I was really confused on the dialogue and who was speaking at what time. Technically, you should start a new paragraph every time a new person speaks. And when Snape says, "Evans, do me a favor," it ought to be favour. Don't worry, I miss British spellings all the time. Otherwise, it was really perfect. I give it 10/10!!!! ~megan~

PS: I love the last line- " 'Tell my father... tell him... tell him I'm defying gravity.' " Bloody brilliant!


Author's Response: \'Ello, Megan! Thanks! I wrote this a long time ago, so it\'s times like these that I just want to go through every chapter of every story and edit edit edit! I love the last line myself, so I\'m happy you like it! As for Elphie and Severus being different, I really didn\'t think they were too unsimilar. Misunderstood, gifted...I thought they were a bit alike! But I also wanted to stress the differences, as well. Thanks again! -Hailey