Hi my name is Kerry and i'm eighteen years old and yes i'm an avid HP fan. My favourite characters are Sirius and Draco so most of my stories will be about them. My stories are from the heart so I hope you enjoy them
i loved it at the beginning, you had captured Hermione's essence so well, while making Draco sound extra hot, but i really think u rushed it afterwards, but still BRILL!! especially some of the descrips like the 1 about the maettalic taste of the ring
really cool can't wait to see what draco's plot is, the bit with the hee-haw was umm weird, but you stayed pretty mush in character. I figure dialoges are ur strong points, BRILL carry on soon
good work yeh, lol i dnt noramlly read slash ships but this one doesn't rush frantically into sex thats good, but i thought u rushed it a bit, take it slow we'll wait for good work like this no matter how long it is (atleast i will)
Author's Response: aww, thank you... :) then ill get it all gone slow... :)