I have been reading your fic for a long time. The chapters are all well-written, they give a lot of detail and they mainly show the feelings of every character, which is good. I love the way you are portraying each character. I think it's very close to the way JKR would actually write them. Anyway, good luck with this fic and I hope you get the next chapter up soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope to update soon!
YAY!!!! i get to be first!!! Ok let me just say, Brilliant job!! everything was perfect!! i hope Ginny and Harry get together soon :) and it would be good if Dean get's kicked in the shins. and what's up with shaklebolt? i didn't get that part :)
Author's Response: Woohoo! I'll see if I can get a kick in the shins for Dean worked out for you. To understand the Shacklebolt bit, you have to think back several chapters to when he and Tonks were trapped by Death Eaters. Tonks got away, but was badly injured (remember Remus confessing his love for her?). Shacklebolt was still missing. Now, it turns out he's alive, but working with Death Eaters - obviously still a good guy, since he helped Parvati escape. Thanks for reviewing!
This is one of the best fics i've read so far. I guess Gem is nicer to Ginny in this chapter than she was before and I wonder who she likes? I Can't wait for your next chapter. This fanfic is great!!
Wow!! that was brilliant. hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks!
I have to agree with CraftySlytherin. It was funny when Ginny footsied the wrong guy. Also, I hope to read the next chapter soon!!
I'm first reviewer!! I said you can count on seeing my review, and here I am!! This is a brilliant chapter you got here. Very descriptive, and interesting. I can hardly wait for chapter 7!!
FIRST REVIEWER!!!!!!!! Okay, let me just tell you that this chapter did make me all warm and fuzzy inside. And about the other story on fanfiction.net. Is that the sequal to this story?
Author's Response: I'm glad i did achieve the warm and fuzzy status that i was hoping for! The other story - The Night That Started it all (which is up here too) isn't the sequel, it's more of a prequel. There are only going to be three chapters to it, The First Night, Coming After The Girl and The Final Night. Each one tells about a different attack on the Potter family. The First Night is the attack on Andrew and Jane which kicked off the whole thing, the second (it's currently in queue here but is up at fanfiction.net) is about the attack on the Potter grandparents and the final chapter will be about the attack on James and Lily. Does all that make sense? I won't be posting the sequel to this on any site for at least another two weeks, i want to get plenty in to it first. But i hope you'll enjoy it when it does surface!
BRILLINT!! Fantastic job MGW!! You really know how to keep your story interesting. I know haven't reviewed Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power lately. I so sorry. I've been really busy with my band and everything, but not to worry. I am once again free for a few weeks.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think i know how to keep the story interesting, really it's just luck! No worries about not reviewing TUP, you haven't missed all that much and i can't wait for you to catch up with it!
This Chapter(along with the 22 chapters before it)was awesome!! I mean it's one of the best fics I have ever read!! I know your having a little trouble with chapter 24, but please don't give up. I hate it when you get into the middle of a really great fic, and then the Author just abandons it. . . But don't worry, I have faith in you. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!! It makes me feel so honoured that people are really adamant that i shouldn't give up. I don't intend to, this story is my pride and joy at the moment and i'm not sure that i have the heart to give up. Even if this has to go through a hundred betas, even if it kills me, i WILL get this chapter posted. If it does kill me then i'll be sure to leave a little note in my will that forces one of my friends to keep posting my chapters, so don't worry. I'm in the middle of writing the sequel so i am DEFINITELY going to push on with it. I will do the very best i can to keep the standard i have set. Thank you seems an entirely inadequate way to respond to you but believe me that it is very heart felt!
Sorry it took me so long to review. I was really busy. Anyway, this was a Brilliant chapter, as was the ones before it. Everything was just so imaginable!!
Author's Response: No need for apology, it hasn't taken you long at all. I'm delighted that you liked it, thank you for the support!
I especially like the ending of this chapter. The girls talk about the boys, while the boys talk about the girls!! This chapter was very interesting!!
Author's Response: It certainly was an interesting chapter, you might want to hang on to sme of the things that were said, they'll come in to play in the sequel!
That was brilliant. The way you described everything about the ball, couples, and their families was awesome!! I knew you would get this chapter up. I just knew it!! I also like the way Ginny asked, Harry, would you kiss me?" I can totally see her asking him that in the 6 or 7 book. If they manage to get together that is. And just to let you know, I also watch Buffy The Vampire Slayer!!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! The band was a weird thing, i knew i wanted a band at the ball and i knew i didn't want it to be The Weird Sisters. I was sitting typing away with Buffy on in the background and Willow suddenly put up a Dingoes poster and the idea was planted!
Fantastic!!! Brilliant!!! Awesome!!! What else can I say?
Author's Response: Wow, thanks, you're the best!
FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!! this chapter was truly amazing!! I have already read chapter 34. Not to spoil it for anyone else, but Please let chapter 35 be a little bit more happy!! Anyway, keep up the good work!!!!
Author's Response: You'll find chapter 35-39 up today and i'm afraid it doesn't look good! Sorry! The chapters i'm postin here are slightly better quality because they've been through my betas but i'm updating the other site as i go! Thanks for the encouragement!
Wow!! Your fanfic is great, I read all the chapters so far and I'm amazed at what you can come up with. I can't even wait for the next chapter and I have no doubt it will be just as great as the others.
Author's Response: Thanks, actually, I've written up to Chapter 17... 73 pages.
I'm so sorry i couldn't review chapter 10. My computer was down and I couldn't get on for a couple days. Anyway, This chapter is the best yet. Harry and Ginny kiss on the train and Harry meets Death Eaters. I hope to read the next chapter soon. And, chapter ten was awesome!!!
Author's Response: its alright, i still love you...lol.....thanks a million
Awesome Chapter!! But I really hate cliffhangers!! Ginny finally knows how Harry feels about her, so please don't kill Harry. Did I mention that I hate cliffhangers?
Author's Response: Thanks and i know.....it would be very sad for harry to die....
Fantastic!!!! This chapter was truly amazing!!! Everything was perfect. The spells, Voldemort's fear, everything!!!! please hurry with the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you!! the next chapter is submitted...
Brilliant. I hope Harry and Ginny will get together soon. I also like the way you explain everything so well. You give very good details about the places they go and the things they do. very Brilliant. Please hurry with next chapter. I'm anxious to countinue the story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much.....i think the details really help the story come alive.....at least i hope so.....thanks again for reviewing....
As I said before. Brilliant!! I like how you described what Harry was learning over the past two months...I hope Harry and Ginny will find there true feelings soon, because Dean is just not the right guy for her. Please submit the next chapter soon!!
Author's Response: Dean is definitly not the right guy for her but you have to kiss a lot of frogs yes?