Oh NO! It's the end of The Cause and you're going too! I'm gutted. This has been such a brilliant story. I have really enjoyed every single chapter and have been simultaneously laughing and crying along with Marty and Remus.

Good Luck for the future I'm so leased you have a character storming through your brain and I hope to read your books in the future.

One thing though- You're never too grown up for fanfiction - as a Mum I'm enjoying this site immensly. However I understand how obsessive characters and writing can be when they won't leave your head. Come back if you get any other ideas.

I have LOVED your Marauders and think they may have influenced mine, just a weeny bit.

Good Luck with A'levels. Good Luck with your book and Good Luck with everything else.

Feel a bit sad but it's been great reading you.

Author's Response: Thank you, those are all really nice things to say. It's not that I think I'm too "grown up" for fanfiction, or anything else for that matter. I just think I'm done writing it; you never know, I guess. Anyway, this is really such a great review. I'm so glad you've enjoyed the things I've wrote, because I so enjoyed writing them. Thanks again, really, and for the good luck too. I'll definitely take it!

Funny, as always, but quite sad when she thought about her mum. Oh and I had my hands in front of my eyes when they so nearly kissed. AGHHHH! The Frustration!

Author's Response: Tell me about it! I'm afraid it will only get more frustrating for a while though ... it was actually quite funny to write their complete denial!

I decided to read this after reading your Drabble for one of the challenges. This story is superb. You have an amazing way of writing. Extraordinarily descriptive,too. I loved Tonks appearance - there's a real tension there as Remus is so torn.
Brilliant!

This is good! This is a wonderfully original story, Molly, and I'm ashamed that I've only found it because you wanted a review. Hmmm, a whole class of Potters - that would be a shock to the system.

From the start, I loved how you drew the reader in. Harry's breakfast with his family, Ginny's rather alarming resemblance to Molly (okay it's always been there) and the description of Godric's Hollow - all are great. I particularly liked this line

But whenever Harry heard this, he would just smile and explain that Voldemort had already taken too much from him in his life, and that it was high time he started taking back what was rightfully his.

And it would be a far happier place to live than Grimmauld Place.

You've explained the set-up to the story very well and I'm intrigued enough to carry on reading. Nathaniel sounds like a troublemaker and well-done Ron for working out SHAM. Ahh, and is Hermione pregnant? My only slight nit-pick, is that they're still calling Professor McGonagall by her title. I wondered if they'd call her Minerva - after all they're not in school now. I suppose it could be argued that se's still a formidable presence, but Sirius and Remus called Dumbledore Albus. That's just my opinion and a very lowly one at that.

I'm really looking forward to reading the rest.

Carole xxx

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story and will reivew more of the story. Nate is so much my baby; my imaginary convicted-felon baby.

How come I've never read this before. Probably because I'm a fool. Thea, this is lovely. Elizabeth is so alone and yet so certain that she's right. It was wonderful to read, and you've convinced me that he's still alive.

Why didn't they send more than two people, and two people that already assumed he was dead?

I liked Remus in this very much. He's one of my favourite characters and I think you caught his innate kindness as well as his intelligence. But he also has that unquestioning side to his nature (belief that Moody had died, belief that Snape was good on Dumbledore's say so - okay I know he was right, but he didn't want to believe he hadn't questioned Dumbledore) . Yeah, you captured Remus very well, and the whole magical condescension towards us Muggles. Great story ~Carole~

Author's Response: Thank you for this lovely review! I like Remus very much myself. I think his self doubt and self-loathing because of his lycanthropy, while understandable, is self-indulgent and keeps him from being what he could have been - not just to himself, or to Tonks, but to the Wizarding World as a whole. It is very very human, but I'd love to see an AU in which he mans up and takes on the leadership role that Dumbledore leaves vacant- since no one else does. I also like Mad-Eye, (OK, I passionately adore Moody and should he show up on my doorstep Mr. Posky might have a bit of trouble holding on to me) and I think he is sadly undervalued by his "friends." As much as Arthur and Amos do try to save his bacon in the beginning of Goblet of Fire, they both think he's nuts. If they hadn't dismissed him then, Barty Crouch might not have had his opportunity. As the series goes on, we see he isn't quite as nuts as they play it out. (of course if anyone in the books had any sense they'rd be no plot, but still...) I think it was unconscionable that the Order let Moody go up with Mundungus, who he basically had to shanghai into it, as his back rider. Harry, when he carefully searches for an appropriate tree to under which to bury Moody's eye, mourns him more than anyone else, including those who'd known him for years. I think it's more than Harry just feeling badly about yet another person dieing for him - I think as a partial outsider himself he has a clearer vision of Mad-Eye than, say, the twins or Ron. Elizabeth, also an outsider, has a clearer vision of him as well. She knew him for years as a Muggle, so to her, his human qualities are far more important than his magical properties. He may have been the best Auror the Ministry ever had, but to his wife he is preeminently the exquisitely kind and good-humored man in the house over the hedge, who taught her how to prune rosebushes and poked the mashed potatoes at her Thanksgiving dinner with a stick like a little boy. Thanks again. I love reviews of any sort, but I especially love reviews where people tell me they are fools for not having read the story earlier - I can see this may be favorite type of all, despite this being the very first one! Thea

That is very, very funny. Poor old Remus- I love the thought of him in a pink Flamingo costume. Should never bet against James- hee hee.

Author's Response: When I came up with the idea of Remus in a flamingo suit at around three in the morning it seemed really amusing to me, I\'m glad to hear that others find it funny too!\r\nI\'m really happy you like the story, thanks for your review!

I love the introduction of George in this and Percy feeling guilty. I hope she stops being horrible to Ron soon, it's not his fault!

Another great chapter, Terri. Well done.

Terri, I've only just stumbled on your story. This is wonderful! From the start I was looking for loopholes in the idea but you've closed every one. This is a superb piece of writing. The dialogue flows and the descriptions are amazing. I get a real sense that I'm there with the trio.
I LOVED the dialogue between Harry, Snape and Dumbledore. So in character!

Marvellous, marvellous story. Can't wait for the next chapter (Tarnation to the queue closure!)

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. As I wrote this, I knew the questions I would be asking, so I made sure I answered each of them. There is lots more to come. As soon as the queue opens again, I can submit more. The dialogue between Harry and Snape was my favorite part to write. I let Harry say what he wanted to say to Snape as I wrote it. The characters write themselves in this story. I have no control over them. Thanks again for taking the time to review.

Oh, I started crying again. First I was laughing at George's crack about Dudley but then the tears began to flow.

Another great chapter, Terri and you're exploring Pettigrew again...interesting. (Hopefully without his girlfriend!)

I look forward to more chapters. Carole xxx

I liked this. I loved hearing about Weasley life from Bill's point of view. I was getting so carried away that I'd forgotten until right at the end that he'd been savaged by Greyback. Made me shiver.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I am glad you got so caught up in the story the reality of what happened 'made you shiver'. I enjoyed writing Bill's story. I thought it needed to be told. I am going to be submitting the next chapter soon.