08/18/08
Hi, I'm Avery, nice to meet you.
I'm a sophomore in college, 19 years young.
I've written two stories, working on a third, working on updating, and working on an OC.
I'm accio avery on the Beta Boards.
I love HP humour and really good HP romance fics.
When I'm not reading or writing I'm looking forward to the next time I'll be reading or writing.
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My Troubled Tyrant by Belledeg
Rated: Professors •
Summary: Keedie Dante has experienced many amazing things during her time at Hogwarts, including the hushed up drama that was the Chamber of Secrets. However, with two overachieving friends and a headmaster who does not even know she exists, Keedie feels that perhaps her seventh year will not be too spectacular. However, Dumbeldore sees her potential as a writer and enrols her in a simple writing course. Here, she meets the mysterious and terrifying Tom Riddle and they instantly get under one another's skin. She is drawn to his dark determination towards some unknown goal and he is fascinated by her, in every way. However, Tom's friends do not approve of Keedie and her unconventional ways and Keedie has many people trying to keep her away from the dark young man as well. Something inside tells Keedie that she can make him better, but even he assures her that this is an impossible task. But she's not one to give up easily...
"He is a dark one, Keedie. Try not to let him consume you entirely."
This story has the characters Albus Dumbledore, Armando Dippet, Moaning Myrtle, Rubeus Hagrid, Aaron Dante, Harry Potter, Ebony Abbott, Minerva McGonagall, Melena Creevey, Ollivander, Gregor Holmwood, Horace Slughorn and, of course, Tom Riddle and Keedie Dante...enjoy!
Winner of "Best Romance Between Other Characters" and nominated for "Best Female OC" in the 2009 Quicksilver Quill Awards
Date: 07/19/09 Title: Chapter 2: Walk Away
Really good story so far, I love how you use little snippits like briefely referencing how her mother died without specifically writing those words. Just enough humour as well ("Let's go, I want to watch them squirm! :D ). I don't see how she couldn't have noticed him before now, even if he is in Slytherin, seeing how handsome and alluring he is and all. I can't wait to see what happens next. :) Great job.
Author's Response: I know, they'd have probably met before--a little creative liscence. :-)
Date: 07/19/09 Title: Chapter 5: Growing On Me
Oooh, it's getting very good. I literally gasped when he touched her temple.
Author's Response: I love that bit! Keep reading and reviewing :)
Date: 08/09/09 Title: Chapter 23: Thanks For the Memories
It's a very well written story. One of my favorites that I've read on here, and I've been on this site since 2005, so that's saying something! I'm sooo happy you updated, I nearly knocked myself on the floor when I saw that there was a 23rd chapter :). I liked the accidental knock-down in Diagon Alley when they were eleven, very nice. And Iris's death cleared up a great deal, you were right with adding Keedie's past to the story. I hope this ends well, and I'm sure it will be, however you decide to end it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
-Avery
Author's Response: So glad you like it. The knock-down is one of my favourite moments. :-)
Date: 07/29/09 Title: Chapter 8: I Don't Know How To Love Him!
Ohhhh man, that was a good one.
Author's Response: First kiss, is important!
The Elder Tree by the opaleye
Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Summary: It would have been no surprise to see Vernon Dursley sitting on the frosty concrete of the empty playground one winter evening. It was not a cold winter that year. In fact, the snow had not yet fallen and Christmas was two days away.
Vernon returns to his childhood haunt after his first term at Smeltings only to encounter a strange old woman. Who is she? And what on earth is a Muggle?
This is the opaleye of Slytherin writing for The Untold Story Challenge in the Great Hall on the Beta Forums .
Nominated in the 2010 QSQ Awards for Best General Story.
Date: 09/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Elder Tree
Oooh, wow, that was really something. Very cleverly written and highly original. I loved it. & all of it was in canon and plausible! Hahah, great job.
-Avery
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Avery! I'm glad you liked it :)