These were so much easier to write when I was thirteen...dammit. Oh well.
Name: Leah
Age: 16 going on 17
Location: Outside your back door.
Interests: Your life.
Favorite Things: Definately not The Sound of Music. Or Harry Potter, for that matter. Or sarcasm. Though why you would begin to think such things is beyond me.
Hobbies: Not musical theater, and most certainly not reading or writing.
Tired yet? I can keep going all day.
I won't, though, because you need to read some of those little gems down there. You know, the ones with my name next to them.
Neville stared down at the smouldering scrap of parchment. There, in neat handwriting that was not his own, was printed the name NEVILLE LONGBOTTOM.
When Neville's name emerges from the Goblet of Fire, the Boy-Who-Lived is thrust into his most dangerous challenge yet. For how can a boy with such limited magical ability possibly hope to survive one of the most gruelling and violent competitions in the Wizarding world?
The new Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher takes Neville under his wing, but evil is growing nearer and not everyone is as they seem. Meanwhile new complications arise in Neville's life. How will he cope with these challenges, and what awaits him at the year's end? In Year Four, everything changes...
CEDRIC!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow. Okay, so I have a little idea about who the traitor is, but I don't want to say it partly because I don't want it to be true, and partly because I don't want to end up looking stupid if I'm wrong...But wow. I love the ending. It would really and truly suck for someone to tell you that a person died because you're just that incompetent. As if Neville's self-confidence could use any more beating.
Author's Response: When I reveal the 'faithful servant' (in two chapters' time), let me know who you thought it was. I wonder if you have been able to guess. It's impossible for me to tell if I've been too obvious or too obscure with the clues. As for Neville, I'd like to say he has reached rock bottom at this point, but sadly Umbridge may have something to say about that when the time comes.
Wow, did you make up that sorting hat song? I don't remember it! If you did, that's pretty epicly awesome!
Author's Response: Indeed I did create the Sorting Hat\'s song. It\'s inspired by those in GoF and OotP, but the words are entirely mine. Thanks for the compliment!
Aw, Neville! At least he can rely on Moody. I really like him in this story.
Author's Response: I've always liked Moody, so much so that I remember being very annoyed when he turned out to be Crouch Jr when I first read GoF (plus I didn't see it coming!), so it's great to write the real Moody into the Triwizard Tournament and make him a hero (of sorts). He'll become invaluable to Neville, as you'll see in the next chapter.
YAY NEVILLE! HOORAY FOR RESOURCEFULNESS! And yippee for Dobby, because he is definately one of my favorite characters.
Author's Response: Fortunately, Neville has found himself with a problem in a subject he knows about for once! It is good to have Dobby back; I did enjoy writing him in CoS.
Nice! I absolutely LOVE the article! I especially like the way you didn't just retell the part about Hermione and Krum. It was very smooth and logical.
Author's Response: Thanks! It scares me a bit that maybe I have a knack for writing Rita Skeeter-style hatchet jobs!
Great chapter! What about "Magical Mischeif" products as a company name?
Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for the suggestion. I haven\'t decided on the name yet, but I\'ve got plenty of time. I shouldn\'t need it until OotP.
HOORAY FOR CANON PAIRINGS! I'm glad about that. Now I'm excited to see who Neville will end up with! I really liked Ginny in this. In the books, we don't really get to see much of her personality until the fifth book.
Author's Response: Well, I should warn you there's still a few twists to come, and Harry is still completely oblivious to Ginny (like canon, he won't develop any feelings for her until HBP). Eventually, canon pairings will (mostly) be retained, but we've a long way to go yet. That's all I'll say for now.
Wow. I did not see that coming at ALL. I just hope that if Ginny does actually like Harry (sideways glance? I still believe yes), she doesn't hurt Neville, though I doubt she would. Still. And I'm glad Neville didn't do Harry's stupid heroic thing. I love him, but that bit of thickheadedness was always annoying to me.
Author's Response: Neville doesn't go in for stupid heroism :) The sideways glance is important. Ask yourself, what are Ginny's reasons for doing this? What are Neville's reasons? Are they good ones? I may be a bit twisted, but doomed relationships interest me (as a writer!) far more than successful ones. As I said below, this is sort of my replacement for Harry/Cho and will last into OOTP, but not beyond it.
Dear Draco,
I've got a great idea for a fanclub meeting: go with your biggest fan to a club.
XO
Dear Draco,
Well, you were right: Matt snogged his girlfriend all summer and ignored us! Not to mention the fact that both of them are extremely fond of Public Displays of Affection. They're so SAPPY. Now we're back at Hogwarts, and I'm ready to get back at him. I've teamed up with one of his guy friends (who's just as sickened as I am by their lovey-dovey-ness), and we're coming up with ways to bug them whenever they try to have a public moment. Got any good ideas?
Tired of Tactful and Ready for Revenge
Author's Response: Draco is reviewing your letter!
THANK YOU DRACO I LOVE YOU!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Come back next issue!
If that other person doesn't want to head your fan club, I certainly will! We'll get jackets!
Author's Response: My head is swimming with Draco merchandise to be adopted by a fan club. You've just given me the funniest idea!
We can siriusly submit to this? Okay, totally! I potterfied my problem!
Dear Draco,
My friend Matt and I both come from the same area, so we knew each other before hogwarts. We had another friend who's homeschooled, Melanie. My Matt just got a girlfriend, and he's probably going to be spending most of the summer with her so far. Melanie and I wanted to hang out with him this summer, just the three of us, because Melanie doesn't get to see him for most of the year! How can we ask him to choose without making it seem like we're asking him to ditch his girlfriend?
Trying to be Tactful
Author's Response: Draco is reviewing your letter!
Well...this looks interesting...
Author's Response: Is that a good or bad interesting?
Good interesting...definately good interesting!
Author's Response: Oh, thats good. I was worried. Thanks so much for your review.
I like this story. You've definately captured the disturbingness of Nazi Germany. I look forward to the eventual wizarding equivilent. Very ambitious, and quite cool.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, reviewing, and enjoying the story, Leah_Lovegood. And I look forward to writing the chapters about Grindelwald’s Germany! Cheerio!
~ Tim the Enchanter
That was very good...and also very, very depressing. Alternate ending indeed.
BRILLIANT! I LOVE MINI COOPERS!
I really admire the creativity of the battle scenes. No matter how many insane bloodbaths you create, they're always original and an entertaining mixture of hilarious and disturbing. Not to mention good allusions.
Author's Response:
I like mini coopers too, especially if they can fly! And I’m glad you like my insane bloodbaths! Who knew epically violent battle scenes could be so entertaining?
Tim the Enchanter
Oh my god perfect ending! Definately the best ending I've seen/read for ANYTHING since the end of Monty Python and the Holy Grail! I was starting to think just paragraphs before that, "This ending is so happy...so cute." I was afraid I'd have to write "Awww" as a review. You made my day. Good story, and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Bah! You’ll never catch me writing a story with a cute ending – NEVER! HA HA!
Anyway, the strike of the cement mixer is the absolute favourite plot device – any possible problem in fiction can be solved with twenty tonnes of rolling death! Even Sev/Lily fics – just run over James Potter, and voilà! Vehicular homicide is also perfect for the Dark/Agnst genre! I mean, wouldn’t you feel depressed if cement mixer tyres pulverised your pelvis?
But I digress. Thanks for the review, and for enjoying the story so much!
Ha. Very funny. Any story with Monty Python references is one I will read.
Author's Response:
Oh good! I better write more stories Python allusions, then. Thanks for the review, and look out for the next chapter whenever it’s approved!
Tim the Enchanter